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Mar 02, 2008 18:41


Title: Boat Trip
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prompt 2, carnivalgirl

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huffle_the_puff March 2 2008, 19:53:54 UTC
Aww, this is lovely! Vive la AU! :P

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carnivalgirl March 3 2008, 15:58:34 UTC
Oui, I agree! Merci beaucoup!

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iamweebles March 2 2008, 20:24:57 UTC
This is the kind of story that I had hoped DH would let us write... sigh. I very much like the idea of the three of them on holiday, happy, and Remus all worried the way that new fathers get.

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carnivalgirl March 3 2008, 16:01:52 UTC
Canon is like the pirate code...more like guidelines anyway. (I'd like to pretend I was the first to say that)
I think they'd probably want to go on holiday after everything! And Remus would be a protective dad. Thank you for reviewing!

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shimotsuki March 3 2008, 00:20:17 UTC
Aww, hooray for AU. I like this little vignette, with Tonks being all excited about the boat trip and Remus, well, The proximity of their infant son was making her sweet husband awfully paranoid -- hee.

(Just a couple of tiny French nitpicks -- it would be ta femme, not ton femme, and there's a special pre-vowel form of beau, so ton bel ami.)

It would be fun to see them meeting the relatives -- any plans to write a sequel?

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tegdoh March 3 2008, 02:26:31 UTC
I totally second this idea. Sequel, please.

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carnivalgirl March 3 2008, 16:08:12 UTC
Two people want a sequel? Well then, I'll have to do it. "By popular demand..."

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carnivalgirl March 3 2008, 16:07:12 UTC
I can imagine Remus and Tonks being like that on holiday-Tonks is probably the 'fun parent'!
Thank you for the Frenchy nitpicks. It's been a long time since I had a French lesson, which shows. :(
Thank you for reviewing, I'm glad you enjoyed.

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pinkhairedauror March 3 2008, 00:48:02 UTC
Hahaha she SO is a brave little boy! ^_^

This was a fun piece, I enjoyed it very much! Nice story, fine work with the circumstances that got them there.

And the Doctor Who fan in my is squee-ing over that Allons-y! ;)

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carnivalgirl March 3 2008, 16:11:37 UTC
I'll pretend I do know what "Allons-y" has to do with Doctor Who, because I too love that show.
Of course Tonks is a brave little boy. She's not a cowardly little boy, is she? ;)
Thank you for reviewing, I'm very pleased you enjoyed it.

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pinkhairedauror March 3 2008, 16:21:26 UTC
haha Well Ten has been known to say Alons-y about four times so far, including "Alons-y, Alonso!" in the last Christmas special... thare are a number of icons too ;) So when I read that part, I just went, OOH! Hehehe Although with French relatives, Remus so makes sense to say that...

Haha I did enjoy it! Thank you for sharing!

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carnivalgirl March 4 2008, 21:20:59 UTC
Ten as well! My only Doctor (I haven't been watching that long). I'm bad at these things. I wasn't paying much attention in the Christmas Special...

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tegdoh March 3 2008, 02:25:22 UTC
This was sweet, and I really enjoyed it. Teddy fic combined with denial!fic is teh bestest.

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carnivalgirl March 3 2008, 16:14:04 UTC
It truly is. Teddy is amazing, but especially so with his mum and dad.
Thank you for commenting!

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