Comments | rt_challenge: Prompts 18, 19, 20

princesstopaz in rt_challenge

Prompts 18, 19, 20

Aug 28, 2007 02:52

Title: Discourse
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princesstopaz, august ficathon, prompt 20, prompt 19, prompt 18

Comments 8

rose_papillon August 28 2007, 10:54:44 UTC

That was awesome! You captured Tonks's character so well.

princesstopaz August 28 2007, 14:15:37 UTC

Thanks, exactly what I was hoping to do.

jadeddiva August 28 2007, 11:40:42 UTC

I loved the use of only Tonks' dialogue to give her perspective - very inventive, and an interesting read!

princesstopaz August 28 2007, 14:19:20 UTC

Thanks, I was hoping it was. :)

gijane7702 August 28 2007, 17:29:11 UTC

This is so cool!

I like how the whole ficcy is just Tonks' dialouge. YOu can figure out what Remus says to her by her responses. Great job capturing her character!

princesstopaz August 29 2007, 03:35:14 UTC

Thanks, I was afraid people would get confused or wouldn't like it. Great that it's otherwise. :D

morrighangw August 29 2007, 06:06:28 UTC

Ooooh...nice. Very unique.

jncar August 29 2007, 20:16:40 UTC

This is such a fun, unique way to tell a story. It was great using my imagination to fill in the blanks, and your characterization of Tonks was spot-on.

And I did love the idea of a drunken Remus with wandering hands confessing his love, and then pretending like nothing had happened once he sobered up.

Really nice work.