Prompt Fifteen: Formalities

Aug 14, 2007 21:49

Title: Formalities
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prompt 15, august ficathon, gijane7702

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anonymous August 15 2007, 02:04:14 UTC
I didn't get tears in my eyes until the last line. I really like your take on Andromeda in this fic.

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gijane7702 August 15 2007, 02:06:35 UTC
Thanks for reading =)

I know...I started crying as I typed it. I too really like Andromeda in this. Poor woman...

Glad you...er, enjoyed.

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morrighangw August 15 2007, 02:09:32 UTC
Despite the angst, I was still able to smile. All the little snapshots of their life (loved the first kiss in front of the Order idea - Padfoot strikes again! XD) were perfect.

Darn you, JKR..... *shakes fist*

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gijane7702 August 15 2007, 02:19:58 UTC
Thanks for reading =)

I know. It's quite loverly...right up to that last paragraph.

Oh you know Padfoot SO set them up! And I like to think the Order, including Andi and Ted, watched amused as they fell in love.

WHY JKR WHY!!!

Glad you enjoyed.

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lady_tavington August 15 2007, 03:19:03 UTC
Oh, that last line is the clincher.

Nice work. It's a really good look at what Andromeda must've really thought of it all.

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gijane7702 August 15 2007, 11:04:04 UTC
Thanks for reading =)

Yes, I'm sure that Andromeda liked Remus. We now know that she WAS an Order memeber, so she watched them happen.

Glad you enjoyed. Sorry about the last line!

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princesstopaz August 15 2007, 04:25:36 UTC
That last line was unbelievably cruel. I was just fine with the rest of the fic, even the H/G reference (not my cup of tea and all, so I really had fun reading DH), but then you had to throw in that last line. Why? Why must you torture me so? Oh... heh... DH spoiler warning....

Absolutely loved it! Perfect from beginning to end! :D *goes away to bawl eyes out* Wahhhh!!!!!!

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gijane7702 August 15 2007, 11:05:36 UTC
Thanks for reading =)

Sorry about that! I take it you're not a H/G fan? Is it Harry or is it Ginny? I ADORE them. Even with all the R/T paraelles?

Glad you...um, enjoyed it.

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eternalylost August 15 2007, 16:42:30 UTC
The last line made me cry. I got chills down my spine :[
The fic was wonderful though. I loved Harry's line about soon losing his guest status. Oh, and I loved the idea of Ginny going to their wedding.

Ahhh they really were too young to die. It wasn't fair. For ANY of them to die.

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gijane7702 August 15 2007, 21:24:07 UTC
Thanks for reading =)

Well, it was war. It wasn't fair, but understandable. But NOT Remus and Tonks. They were just pure overkill so that Teddy Lupin could be the next Harry Potter--minus the cool scar!

Glad you enjoyed.

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