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Prompt Fifteen: Formalities

Aug 14, 2007 21:49

Title: Formalities
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belladonna1986 August 15 2007, 16:50:17 UTC

That was sad and did hurt a little, there's nothing more painful than seeing that the people you loved, are reduced to mere memories and photos, than being real anymore.
Beautifully written

gijane7702 August 15 2007, 21:27:01 UTC

Thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed!

It was very sad =(

phoenixfyre13 September 2 2007, 17:34:53 UTC

Well, you warned me...

Very sad, but also a great look at poor Andromeda. As if having two psycho sisters wasn't enough, let's add a dead husband, a dead duaghter/son-in-law, and a grandson to raise to deal with. Poor Teddy, indeed.

Well done.

gijane7702 September 2 2007, 19:07:05 UTC

Thanks for reading!

I DID warn you...it's still so sad. I really must get the ficcy going for patriot_jackie.

Glad you (sort of) enjoyed it =)

fireblazie September 2 2007, 19:51:43 UTC

I was apprehensive of reading this because I was adamant in my wanting to read fluff, happy, daisies, sunshine fic, but I was drawn to this, for some reason.... and, oh. I love the subtle emotions that play throughout the story, and that *last* line just tugs at the heartstrings.

gijane7702 September 2 2007, 21:27:00 UTC

Thanks for reading =)

Yeah, it's rough, huh? And the last line just KILLS you. Sorry 'bout that.

On a happier note, I AM going to (eventually soon) write their first kiss as it is portrayed here.

Glad you decide to read, though the warnings, and that you enjoyed!

phe_o October 1 2007, 04:31:08 UTC

Oh, sniff. That last bit got me too. Really simple but also very meaningful read. I love the little touches you included--the wedding, the funeral. Nice job. (sob)

gijane7702 October 1 2007, 20:11:52 UTC

Thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed =)

Yeah, it's perfectly fine..til I punch you in the stomach with that last line.

Sorry...