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Prompt 30

Feb 01, 2007 19:51

Title: Three words
Author: everknowledge
Format& Word Count: drabble, 99 words
Rating: G.
Prompt: #30 Depeche Mode Lyrics
Summary: They are only three words
Author's Note : Sorry this is late.

( Three words )

everknowledge, prompt 30

Comments 14

annabtg February 2 2007, 01:37:37 UTC

Oooh, nicely done. Very emotional. Almost chillingly so.

See ya,
Anna.

everknowledge February 2 2007, 13:37:52 UTC

Thank you. Glad you liked it.

no_sweeter_song February 2 2007, 01:57:45 UTC

but maybe not for the better

Wrapped up the whole piece. And the repetitiveness gave it a gorgeous, airy tone. Very pretty work.

everknowledge February 2 2007, 13:38:05 UTC

Thank you very much!

phe_o February 2 2007, 05:32:54 UTC

Nice job :)

everknowledge February 2 2007, 13:38:39 UTC

Thank You! =)

lady_bracknell February 2 2007, 14:06:50 UTC

This is excellent. I love the transition in Remus' monolgue from being pleased and almost in awe that someone's said it to him, to utterly panicked. Nicely done.

everknowledge February 3 2007, 19:30:53 UTC

Thank you very much.

iamweebles February 2 2007, 17:22:42 UTC

This is lovely, very poetic. I especially like the "whispered" and the "chilled" together because there's a very physical sensation to both of them.

everknowledge February 3 2007, 19:29:52 UTC

Thank you so much.