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Prompts 26-29

Jan 29, 2007 21:13

Title: Remus and the Tramp pt. 5
Author: Devonwood
Format & Word Count: Fic; 1,970
Rating: Pg-13/T
Prompt: Prompt 26 (scandal), Prompt 27 (toilet paper roll), Prompt 28 (Snow Patrol lyrics), Prompt 29 (picture of a lion statue)
Warning: language, sexuality
Summary: “I would offer you my jumper, but it’s the only “pimp” thing I have, and that would ( Read more... )

devonwood, prompt 26, prompt 27, prompt 29, prompt 28

Comments 16

morrighangw January 30 2007, 05:36:43 UTC

*snicker* Nice twist at the end! I never expected that. =D

He he he he... Tonks on a leash. XD

devonwood February 1 2007, 21:24:13 UTC

:D Glad you liked it. Thanks for the review! :)

annabtg January 30 2007, 09:34:51 UTC

That was a fun story!

Staying in character, LOL! Right.

See ya,
Anna :)

devonwood February 1 2007, 21:24:57 UTC

Remus isn't as quick on his feet as he seems. ;)

Thanks for the review!

lady_bracknell January 30 2007, 11:57:57 UTC

Nice ending (although if you do embelish this, could we have a sneaky look at how they actually got together?).

I really liked Charlie's cameo, and the line about Remus not wanting to give up his jumper because its his only proper pimp item was priceless.

devonwood February 1 2007, 21:27:01 UTC

although if you do embelish this, could we have a sneaky look at how they actually got together?

Definitely. Whether it be in the actual story, our as an outtake, I'm determinded to write the "Getting together" scene. :)

Charlie had a rather unfortunate cameo, I'd say. Drunk and sick in a bar, and then had a dragon practically thrown at him. :D

Thanks for the lovely review!

eshesh January 30 2007, 21:52:57 UTC

This was such a fun story the entire way through. Great job! I'd love to read it all again if you republish a new & improved version. :)

devonwood February 1 2007, 21:30:19 UTC

:D Thanks for the lovely review!

shimotsuki January 31 2007, 15:55:03 UTC

Great ending! That put the whole crazy adventure in a new light. I'm still chuckling over the image of the vanishing meat. And wondering if Kingsley had an ulterior motive when he had them playing those particular roles for their disguise. !!

devonwood February 1 2007, 21:31:13 UTC

And wondering if Kingsley had an ulterior motive when he had them playing those particular roles for their disguise. !!

With Kingsley, you'd never know. :D

Thanks for the lovely review!