Getting Her Man

[bratty_jedi]

Title: Getting Her Man

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Comments

[emoonstone]

This is a great take on the prompt. I love the idea that Tonks would think like this, in fact it's a bit like running through every eventuality in your head. I liked.

[mercutio_rane]

A very cute spin on the prompt, and it somehow all comes together when we realize it's a daydream. It says so much about her confidence level when even her daydreams are thwarted!

[bratty_jedi]

I was aiming at having eyebrows raised at the apparent OOC-ness of Tonks moving gracefully and then have reality come crashing in on Tonks and the reader almost simultaneously. Hopefully you expereinced something at all close to that which is why it seemed to come together with the daydream realization.

Rachael
Bratty

[sugarannie]

I never would have thought of interpreting the prompt like this, but I really like your idea.
Well done!

[miss_tilney]

Isn't it so annoying when your daydreams don't go the way you want!

I like this, very cute.

Thank you!

[bratty_jedi]

Happens to me all the time!

Glad you liked it

Rachael
Bratty

[hplilypotter]

Very good take on the prompt!