LJ Idol 10: Week 15: Patchwork Heart

[rswndrlst]

Intersubjectivity
She shoulders her laptop bag and steps into the aisle joining the off boarding line.

When she makes it to the side of the bus she retrieves her pack, checking to be sure Mimzy her stuffed traveling companion is secured to the side, before hoisting the large pack up onto her shoulder and following the crowd into the passenger waiting

Comments

[dmousey]

I really liked this. Great concept and it played off the prompt perfectly. Hugs and peace~~~

[kajel]

This was great and left me wanting more!

[alycewilson]

Such a fascinating concept! I like where you went with it.

[penpusher]

Does this count as a threefer?

I definitely like these two characters, love their interaction/banter and the way they are sort of stalking each other/marking their territory. More animal than human, more machine than animal.

[lolaslaughter]

I love this entry so much!! It makes me want to know so much more about this game that they're playing!! I really hope you revisit this one!! I don't know if my curiosity could take it if you didn't!! <3 <3 <3