LJ Idol 10: Week 15: Patchwork Heart

[rswndrlst]

Intersubjectivity
She shoulders her laptop bag and steps into the aisle joining the off boarding line.

When she makes it to the side of the bus she retrieves her pack, checking to be sure Mimzy her stuffed traveling companion is secured to the side, before hoisting the large pack up onto her shoulder and following the crowd into the passenger waiting

Comments

[favoritebean]

At first, I was a little confused, but as I continued reading, I found myself drawn in. I like your take on the prompt. Great work!

[banana_galaxy]

It's like a geek romance! That's adorable.

[beeker121]

I really like this, and want to know more!

(I was also out before Captcha the flag and still have a story idea from then, this makes me think I should take the risk.)

[rswndrlst]

you totally have to write yours now! because that was an intersection round! Gary even tried to encourage me in the gr that week to find a partner to homegame with but I was afraid my take on this prompt was just to too weird and chickened out

[shadowwolf13]

Very awesome!!

[halfshellvenus]

I'll admit, because the dialogue was in italics rather than inside quotation marks, I wondered if this might be virtual reality, or some other form of internal electronic communication (in which case, one or both MIGHT be bots).

I liked the flavor of this and the setting, and am intrigued by what it is they think they're chasing.

Plus, geek references right and left! :D