FIC: The Beginning of Something Old for moonlitelupins

Dec 03, 2009 00:54

Title: The Start of Something Old
Author: mezzopianoforte
Recipient: moonlitelupines
Rating: PG-13
Highlight for Warnings: *swearing *
Word Count: 1940
Summary: In which there is late-night-kissing, passing queer friends the gravy, an inadvertent de-closeting and the start of a relationship.
Author's notes: Thanks so much,molsymo, for the fantastic beta job! And moonlitelupines, I really hope you ( Read more... )

rated pg13, 2009, art, fic

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werewolfsfan December 19 2009, 03:52:20 UTC
Wow! &hearts moonlitelupins is one lucky fangirl! As everyone has noted, "Pass your queer friend the gravy, Peter" is going to be a classic "coming out" scene that people will be searching for in accio_rs_fics years from now! But I really liked Sirius' earlier coming out scene with James.

It was a mark of their imperturbable friendship, Sirius thought later, that no one had asked But are you okay with this? or But you know I’m okay with this, don’t you?? Of course James was all right with it and of course Sirius knew that. They didn’t need to discuss it - it would never have been anything else but okay.

The get together scene in Remus' bed is adorable and your art is gorgeous! Not to forget McGonagall's shortsight and July being to hot to hex Snivellus.......

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moonlitelupines December 19 2009, 09:46:29 UTC
OMG I REALLY AM!!!!

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mezzopianoforte December 19 2009, 19:54:47 UTC

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mezzopianoforte December 19 2009, 17:16:56 UTC
awhh you're too kind!

thank you for this lovely comment <3

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epithalamium December 19 2009, 04:11:11 UTC
I love love love that first picture. My mind is really feeling the Christmas. XD

And I am quite intrigued by the two parts of this narrative, as well as the way they are reflected by both pictures. For one, we see this lovely line in the wintery part: He laughed at something secret and it sounded like summer. And then the story flowed on to show us summery scene. Ah, beautiful!

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mezzopianoforte December 19 2009, 17:17:32 UTC
dude I am so feeling the Christmas at the moment, too. Helped by the fact that it snowed here :D

I'm glad you liked it!

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isisanubis December 19 2009, 06:58:22 UTC
This is absolutely lovely. If I were anything other then straight, that's how I'd come out. I had to stop reading several times, I was laughing so hard. As funny as some of it was, there were really sweet bits, too. The whole thing was amazing. The boys were wonderful. Thank you so much for sharing this with us.

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mezzopianoforte December 19 2009, 17:24:32 UTC
I'm happy the sweetness/humour came across :) thank you for the lovbely words!

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Re: This may be a bit random, but... mezzopianoforte December 19 2009, 17:18:33 UTC
I haven't, actually, but that's a lovely painting! kind of Van Gogh-y to me? but with less yellowyness and thank you for saying it's lovely :)

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midnitemaraud_r December 19 2009, 09:09:28 UTC
This was very sweet! And when Peter passed the gravy to Remus, I totally sporfled. Hee! Awkward boys are ♥!! The art is lovely and a perfect complement to your story!

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mezzopianoforte December 19 2009, 17:19:13 UTC
haha I'm glad it made you sporfle. I do love a bit of awkwardness in fics. thank you <3

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