FIC: The Beginning of Something Old for moonlitelupins

Dec 03, 2009 00:54

Title: The Start of Something Old
Author: mezzopianoforte
Recipient: moonlitelupines
Rating: PG-13
Highlight for Warnings: *swearing *
Word Count: 1940
Summary: In which there is late-night-kissing, passing queer friends the gravy, an inadvertent de-closeting and the start of a relationship.
Author's notes: Thanks so much,molsymo, for the fantastic beta job! And moonlitelupines, I really hope you ( Read more... )

rated pg13, 2009, art, fic

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remuslives23 December 18 2009, 21:38:20 UTC
Lovely art! The winter one is my fav, I think. :) And Sirius' attempt at coming out was hilarious! I loved those last few lines the most though. Just gorgeous!

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mezzopianoforte December 19 2009, 17:15:16 UTC
thank you =)

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mezzopianoforte December 19 2009, 17:15:35 UTC
hahaha, I did like writing the coming out scene! happy you liked it :)

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mezzopianoforte December 19 2009, 17:15:47 UTC
thank you :)

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brighty18 December 19 2009, 01:26:34 UTC
First of all, you are totally awesome for your mix of beautiful art (loved them both, but especially the first one) and clever story. Second of all, you did both beautifully.

That was the most brilliantly awkward coming out scene ever!

“Pass your queer friend the gravy, Peter,” Sirius commanded, fully expecting his friends to understand this as a nice, understated de-closeting.

He had considered the possibility of keeping closeted, but in the end, he’d decided against it. For one thing, he could hardly get a decent shag if no one knew he was looking for a boy. For the other, he’d rather tell everyone himself than have it come out like some hideous, shameful secret from other people.

Sirius almost topped out of his seat when Peter nonchalantly passed the gravy to Remus Bloody Lupin.

“What the hell?” Sirius said indignantly. “Moony?”

I felt so sorry for both of them! But it all worked well in the end, did it not?

Well done!

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mezzopianoforte December 19 2009, 17:16:24 UTC
thank you! and yes, it did indeed work out beautifully in teh end for them :D

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secretsolitaire December 19 2009, 02:28:16 UTC
Oh, this is so gorgeous. I loved the silly awkward boys, and Sirius's failed coming out scene, and McGonagall's attack of shortsightedness. ♥

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secretsolitaire December 19 2009, 02:29:01 UTC
Oops, hit post too soon! I didn't even get to the art, which is beautiful! I love the winter one especially.

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mezzopianoforte December 19 2009, 17:16:36 UTC
thank you :)

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