Fic: If Wishes Were Horses for carmine_ink

Nov 26, 2008 20:58

Title: If Wishes Were Horses
Author: molsymo
Written for: carmine_ink
Rating: Under 13, for language
Prompt: Christmas in a foreign country (and kinda Non-magic AU - Remus and Sirius as college roommates)
Summary: Remus thinks that he’s not going to make it eight more days like this.

If Wishes Were Horses )

2008, rated pg, fic

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rhye December 3 2008, 16:45:59 UTC
Haha! All the best revelations (and worst, but that doesn't matter here...) are easiest to say while driving, when you don't have to face anyone. I kind of wish there was more of this, which you should take as a great compliment, because I don't even tend to read let alone like non-magic AUs. But the foreign setting, places I've never been, felt like magic to me.

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molsymo December 3 2008, 22:34:39 UTC
They are, aren't they? Or online... ahaha. Anywho, thank you! I'm thrilled you enjoyed it despite the non-magicness. I tried to write so that had I changed a few key words (Cambridge, car, etc.), it could be conceivably canon. I'm thrilled the foreign setting worked for you; I dream of Greece constantly, so it's a bit magically for me as well:)

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sambethe December 3 2008, 16:57:03 UTC
So sweet. :)

Enjoyed!

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molsymo December 3 2008, 22:31:26 UTC
Why thank you!

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tourdefierce December 3 2008, 18:53:15 UTC
This was just delightful! I love how no one knows what the fuck is going on and Remus is so confused. I love even more that we don't know what they had before or anything else but that the tension between the two of them and the general weirdness of the situation is evident. GUH! And the car scene. OMG it's amazingly written and I love Remus here and of course, Sirius' general lack of sense!

This was wonderful. Perfect.

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molsymo December 3 2008, 22:51:36 UTC
Thank you thank you! I love fics that are just a snippet of the characters' lives but still tell so much, and this was my attempt to write a scene that only explained but the bare necessities. Especially with AU's, I try to leave the rest as open as possible. So glad you like it!

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crooked December 3 2008, 20:06:56 UTC
i don't usually read non-magic AUs, but ohh this was wonderful! i'm so glad it ended on the note it did. i have a terrible fondness for road trip-ish scenes in fics, too, so that was a nice bonus. :D

great job ♥

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molsymo December 3 2008, 22:45:35 UTC
Thaaaank you! I am thrilled to have carried you along despite the lack of magic. And my fondness for the roadtrip is nearly limitless, I had to stick that awkward conversation in there somehow! I'll leave the rest of their trip to your imagination. :)

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mysecretashes December 3 2008, 20:09:38 UTC
Very nice. I enjoyed reading it. :D

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molsymo December 3 2008, 22:52:07 UTC
Thank you! ♥

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