Bonus Fic: Unfettered And Alive for sambethe

Dec 22, 2011 12:05

Title: Unfettered And Alive
Author/Artist: liseuse
Recipient: sambethe
Rating: PG
Contents or warnings (highlight to view): *None *
Word count: 870
Summary: Records go missing, Sirius plans and Lily wins.
Notes: This is a bonus round fic for sambethe and was wonderfully betaed by busaikko. All remaining mistakes are, obviously, mine and mine alone. The title owes its existence ( Read more... )

bonus extras, 2011, rated pg, fic

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Comments 15

secretsolitaire January 2 2012, 15:14:20 UTC
*giggles endlessly* This is fantastic.

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liseuse January 2 2012, 21:52:59 UTC
Thank you!

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brighty18 January 2 2012, 20:13:24 UTC
That was adorable and funny! I love the witty domesticity of it - they seem so happy and in love. You know what I mean, it's one of those things in which they are so happy with each other that it allows them to have adventures and fun friendships with people like Lily. No angst, just fun. I like that.

I also very much appreciated your vision of Sirius as cooking well, being a good host, and having an elaborate filing system for his music. I could very much see him being like that. He has such an expansive personality: he's very generous by nature, but also seems to love to enjoy himself. Consequently, I bet he would love to cook and give parties - especially ones that include Remus getting drunk and dancing on the table and other sorts of delightful debauchery.

This bit really cracked me up: Sirius frowned. “Accio Lily’s Mocking Note.” A piece of parchment, folded to look like a swan, flew through the air from the record shelf and landed neatly on the table. It unfolded itself and made a noise that was suspiciously like McGonagall ( ... )

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liseuse January 2 2012, 21:55:27 UTC
Thank you for this wonderful comment! I like to try and bring fun and levity to my Small Gifts fic. If only so I can put them through the wringer the rest of the time and not feel so bad about it!

My personal canon is that Remus is hopeless at cooking, and Sirius has basically banned him from the kitchen. Sirius enjoys cooking because he never got to when he was growing up, and Remus is really bad at it because his mother and father shared the cooking but both were not very interested in it. So it is nutritious just not tasty or particularly enjoyable. Sirius thinks this is horrifying. But he does create truly horrific messes in the kitchen because he always forgets there aren't millions of houselves just waiting to clean up after him.

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sambethe January 3 2012, 04:38:39 UTC
I totally love what you did with this. So thoroughly magical with a muggle object (and a prompt that could be a total road away). And you know my love for a devious Lily.

Love it. Thanks so much!

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liseuse January 3 2012, 16:25:38 UTC
Yay! I am glad you enjoyed it! I had a lot of fun writing this. Especially devious Lily. She is so awesome!

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sambethe January 3 2012, 16:46:10 UTC
Ahh, autocorrect, how I love you and your nonsense. Road away for throw away? I need to stop commenting via my phone. ;p

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liseuse January 3 2012, 16:48:07 UTC
I did wonder what a "road away" was, but I figured it was just some cool person slang that I'm not hip to. Are we still saying "hip to"?

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mindabbles January 3 2012, 06:44:17 UTC
LOL! Lovely!! Sirius with a filing system and menu-planning face is brilliant. I love Lily in this. Brilliant plan!

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liseuse January 3 2012, 16:26:09 UTC
Aww, thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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magnetic_pole January 3 2012, 16:17:46 UTC
Aw, fun! Your fics are always so therapeutic, L. Your characters always enjoy their early twenties in a way I like to imagine they did. M.

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liseuse January 3 2012, 16:26:56 UTC
There must have been some fun and light amidst the gloom and doom of war! I just like to think about that when it comes to Small Gifts time. Plenty of time for the doom and gloom fic the rest of the year.

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