FIC: The Mess We're In for on_wax

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Title:The Mess We're In
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Comments

[midnitemaraud_r]

BWAHAHAHAHAHA! Sloven and evil! Maybe if Sirius is a good boy, Remus will wash his pants for him, too! :-D

Love it! ♥

(You're right! I like this version better!)

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Or lick him clean, you never know your luck ;)

Heh. Stupid last minute fic re-writes! *kicks*

[xantippa_plum]

...the flat had fucking better be spotless.

I bet it will be not! Ah those mutual punishments! XD

[red_squared]

OMG YOU.

*crash tackle glomps*

Heheh, am glad you liked it :D ♥

[xantippa_plum]

Yep, I'm still lurking back in the shadows. :)

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♥

[magnetic_pole]

Hee! I ADORE the very premise of this: the "slovenly," muggle-influenced Remus, reluctant to clean when he doesn't need to, and Sirius, who hates to see anything scuffed or frayed or (god forbid) waiting in the sink for washing up. Fun, fun, fun! M.

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As with all things, Remus intends to get there. Eventually. He just has all of this procrastination to finish up, first, and then he'll be right onto it XD

Thanks, BB!

[bearshorty]

Hee. I loved that Remus used a sandwich as a bookmark and his revenge on Sirius for blabbing to McKinnon. Very fun story. I can really see how being raised as a Muggle makes a difference. And different cleaning styles, I found, is one of the biggest issues of people living together - you captured that well.

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And different cleaning styles, I found, is one of the biggest issues of people living together

OH, yes. Also related is 'different standards of cleanliness'. Normally, the person with higher standards suffers, but Sirius is alllll about spreading the misery :D

Thanks for your comment!

[brighty18]

LOL. “Wormtail lives with his mother, and probably still thinks that clean underwear grows in bedroom cupboards.” Great line, that. Well, actually, there were many great lines in this charming (and very funny) little story. This was another one: More time at home could be interpreted as more time to clean, but Sirius suspects that in the case of Evans, as with Remus, it means more time to accumulate dirty cups, unfinished lunches, apple cores, and towering piles of books that are held open by other books that are held open by yet other books that are held open by pot plants or soup plates or sandwiches or whatever else Remus has to hand when his mind is elsewhere. LOL

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I always love your feedback! You're so generous :)

I like Sirius as the super neat freak tidy one pre-Azkaban, because it all goes to hell once he gets out and totally messes his mindset (yes, I like to torment Sirius).

Thanks again for your comment! ♥