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Day 28 - Fic: Team AU: If I Fell

Oct 28, 2010 13:25

Team: AU
Title: If I Fell
Rating: R
Warnings: Remus/Tonks
Genre(s): Fluff/Romance
Word Count: 9191
Summary: Healer Sirius Black knew he shouldn't fall in love with a patient, especially when the patient was his cousin's boyfriend.
Notes: Many thanks to my beta R.
Prompt: #32 - A Hard Days Night

( If I Fell )

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Comments 11

eprime October 29 2010, 00:10:21 UTC

I enjoyed this a lot. Muggle Remus and Healer Sirius, and they have that instant attraction. Lovely. ;)

secretsolitaire October 29 2010, 01:19:26 UTC

Very sweet read! Though I felt so badly for Remus's situation, being turned as an adult and not knowing what he was in for.

bookgrrrl2006 October 29 2010, 16:40:52 UTC

this was really cool and you very much captured the essence of the characters in canon. the whole thing felt very real too especially the way you handled the love triangle. it wasn't over the top just subtle and heartbreakingly real for poor dora. i also thought it was interesting that dora got herself off every time. that was kind of a telling fact i think.

great story.

ceredwensirius October 29 2010, 23:58:09 UTC

Such an interesting premise, Remus being a Muggle and getting turned as an adult. I felt bad for Dora, but Sirius and Remus' love just couldn't be denied.

Lovely work.

remuslives23 October 30 2010, 10:26:24 UTC

I love that, despite the immediate attraction, you allowed them to develop their friendship first. I love Sirius as a healer, I really do. This was sweet and warm and so lovely!