Day Eleven - Fic: Team AU: Watching You

[rsgamesmods]

Team: Team AU
Title: Watching You
Prompt Number: PROMPT #12
Rating: PG-13
Genre(s): Romance
Pairing(s): Remus/Sirius, implied James/Lily
Summary: When Remus, a Firebender, arrives at Hogwarts, he only expects to learn how to firebend. He doesn’t expect to learn seven other lessons as well, nor does he expect to find them the most meaningful lessons of

Comments

[iheartremus09]

This was very unique. Honestly I know nothing about "The Last Airbender" or whatever, but it worked just the same. That's saying a lot too because not all crossovers are as effective. Perhaps what struck me most is how perfectly canon your characters were. They were very much themselves and that made the whole piece really ring true.

I was fascinated with the Airbender idea and now want to check it out. I'm glad you made the Gryffindor's Firebenders, too. It's not just that it's passionate and funny that Sirius wanted to set things on fire, but even Rowling once said that the four houses corresponded with the four elements. Gryffindor is fire, Hufflepuff is earth, Ravenclaw is air, and Slytherin is water. You can see that in stuff like their personalities, their colors, and the locations of their dorms and/or common rooms. You played on that idea well.

[eprime]

Very creative melding of the two universes. This was really sweet!

[deathjunke]

Okay honestly, i was a little wary about reading this at first but I'm glad i did. IT was very sweet and i loved the dynamics between every one and James saying the wrong thing at the wrong time made me snicker.

Overall the story was very sweet and it was interesting to see how you fit bending in with the story ^^

[lady_luthienne]

Very nice. I like how shy, lonely, unfriendly young Remus is brought out of his shell by Sirius' ingenuous affection.

[mommyconk]

sweet how their friendship/love grew over the years.