Day 6 - Team Star - Fic: Flying by Night

Oct 08, 2015 10:56

Team: Star
Title: Flying By Night
Rating: PG
Warnings: None
Word Count: 2000
Summary: Sirius is unable to find the right words to tell Remus how he feels. Instead, he watches his friend, revelling in the peace being with Remus always gives him, from the sun rises until the stars have taken over the sky.
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museinabsentia October 8 2015, 17:33:22 UTC
Oh, this is so sweet, all the different ways Sirius love Remus, and the whys and hows and... it's just warm and lovely. I love the idea of him seeing Remus in all those different lights, both metaphorically and literally. Just a wonderful little piece.

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huldrejenta November 19 2015, 22:23:41 UTC
Thank you so much! ♥ I'm glad you enjoyed :)

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unicorngirl22 October 8 2015, 18:32:09 UTC
Loved this! There's such an ethereal beauty in every word, and I love the imagery <3

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huldrejenta November 19 2015, 22:24:23 UTC
Thank you!!! ♥ So happy you enjoyed :)

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bookgrrrl2006 October 8 2015, 21:04:59 UTC
this was beautiful! it reminded me of a tone poem or prose poem or some other thing that was at once lovely and lyric as much as narrative. the tone was simply gorgeous and the premise of remus throughout the day and night was original and uplifting.

i applaud you!

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huldrejenta November 19 2015, 22:41:39 UTC
Thank you so much for your wonderful comment! Really happy you enjoyed ♥

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xylophonex October 8 2015, 21:35:07 UTC
Fabulous, I'm impressed!!

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huldrejenta November 19 2015, 22:42:02 UTC
Thank you! ♥

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_jenc_ October 8 2015, 21:43:45 UTC
This was a beautiful one piece which encapsulated the overwhelming love Sirius has for Remus. I absolutely loved every single thing about this. It was very well-written too.

The way in which Sirius observes little details about Remus, for me has always been the best way to describe his love for the other boy.

A fantastic piece of fiction. Thanks!

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huldrejenta November 19 2015, 23:10:56 UTC
Thank you so much for this wonderful comment! I'm very happy you enjoyed ♥

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