Realize (3/4)

Jan 29, 2009 19:35

Title: Realize (3/4)
Author: loveable_me_87
Pairing: Barney/Robin... sorta... eventually.
Rating: G
Disclaimer: I don't own HIMYM.
Summary: Barney wakes up one morning and things aren't how they're supposed to be.
Words: 5974 total (though it keeps changing...)
Warning: Spoilers through "Benefits".

Take time to realize, this all can pass you by. Didn't I tell you?... )

realize, fanfic, how i met your mother

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da_phoenix13 January 30 2009, 00:53:29 UTC
Haha. I love how Barney's all Billy-like around Robin. Also, Barney's "Ted, have I taught you nothing?" was well-played. It makes me sad that Lily and Marshall aren't together any more - though if none of them had ever met Barney, it makes sense that they wouldn't. Hopefully he wakes up from this AU soon, because it's a very sad and scary place!

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rps_lizardspock January 30 2009, 01:03:11 UTC
I'm glad you like it! Yeah, this AU's not so awesome, but it's over soon =)

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otempora42 January 30 2009, 01:18:23 UTC
This AU's getting really interesting. I liked the Billy dialogue as well.

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rps_lizardspock January 30 2009, 17:35:52 UTC
Thanks! =D

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erychan86 January 30 2009, 01:40:52 UTC
Awww brilliant!
I'm sad, the next chapter is the last one but at the same time I'm hapy cos Barney will wakes up from this AU soon -- I hope for him... Is so sad a world without Barney... Ted is still single, Marshal and Lily aren't togheter and now Robin with this Mike, this bad bad BAAAAD Guy...
Is so true that all the beautiful things in Robin, Lily, Ted and Marshal's life are happened because of Barney!
I hope to read the next chapter tomorrow!
Well done :)

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rps_lizardspock January 30 2009, 17:38:53 UTC
>>I'm sad, the next chapter is the last one<<
Or is it? No just kidding, it probably is...

Thanks! Today or tomorrow with the conclusion!

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erychan86 January 30 2009, 17:41:48 UTC
Awww I'm really really impatient sorry ;)

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rps_lizardspock January 30 2009, 17:49:56 UTC
Haha, I like that you're impatient! It makes me happy that you're so interested in the story! The last part is written, I'm just finishing going over it to make sure it's how I want it to be. To be honest, I'm a bit let down by it myself, but hopefully everyone will like it.

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snogged January 30 2009, 04:12:45 UTC
I really like you've tied events in here that make us realize how much Barney really affects the lives of those he's friends with

It broke my heart to see Marshall and Lily separated

And the Mike guy makes me twitch

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roland44 January 30 2009, 05:43:10 UTC
>And the Mike guy makes me twitch

Aww hun, don't worry, it'll all be better soon (I think)...*points to icon* Barney with a shiner will have Robin back in his arms in no time!

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rps_lizardspock January 30 2009, 17:41:16 UTC
Haha, wouldn't you be upset if it didn't go that way =P

Buuuut, this is a Barney/Robin fic, sooo haha

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roland44 January 31 2009, 08:09:34 UTC
I would be terribly upset! But I have survived reading a lot of angsty fic where things go terribly wrong between them, so I'll get over it eventually. =P *goes to read last part*

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roland44 January 30 2009, 05:40:57 UTC
I think I should just let my icon do the talking...that was really nice! :D

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rps_lizardspock January 30 2009, 17:41:42 UTC
Oh, well, if Cobie approves! haha Thanks! =D

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