New Stargate SG-1 Fic: "With Quiet Grace"

Nov 22, 2009 10:43

Ummm...I accidentally wrote fic. See, I thought I was going to be writing Sam/Jack first, because my brain's been all Sam/Jack lately, but then this Sam/Daniel story just showed up and Lillith (the muse) kept yelling until I wrote it. I am but Lillith's slave. Hope you enjoy.:) (It's SO fun to be writing Stargate again ( Read more... )

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amilyn November 22 2009, 17:45:49 UTC
Your words. Gods, woman, they are lyrical and beautiful and painful and always so, so true and gorgeous.

standing on a hot desert planet, a soft breeze ruffling her hair, freckles bright in the alien sunlight. And when she turns his way, her mouth curls into an affectionate smile, even as her eyes remain jaded far beyond her years. And he knows this is why he came back. These moments in the sun. When the simple warmth of human light fades all else into the distance.

So, so gorgeous. And perhaps he has remembered...

For one nitpick in a gorgeous sentence:
Less nights of leather and need and loneliness and anger.
I think "fewer" nights...but then I'm a traditionalist where that's concerned...and...Daniel might be ( ... )

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rowan_d November 23 2009, 00:36:16 UTC
Ah, it's so fun having you back in my current fandom to over-inflate my ego.*g*

Very glad you enjoyed this. And I see your point about "fewer", but I'm going to be the temperamental artist and leave it my way for rhythm and consistency.;) (but if you WANT to be my regular beta again, just say so...LOL)

I just love these glimpses of Sam through your words because she's even MORE beautiful than I see her with your words shining around her.

Okay, that's just a really beautiful thing to say, thank you very very much.

ETA: The icon was WRONG WRONG WRONG. I really need a Just Plain Gorgeous Carter Icon, I think.

Yes you do. This one's the closest thing I've got at the moment.;)

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amilyn November 23 2009, 01:17:08 UTC
I have 2 normal-Carter icons and, I think, 2 or 3 Dorkverse Carter icons. The most gorgeous one I have of Carter is also the "You've got to be KIDDING me" one, so...not so appropriate text-wise, though she looks HOT from "Upgrades" at the restaurant.

it's so fun having you back in my current fandom to over-inflate my ego.

I think it's DEFINITELY MY PLEASURE. I've missed having stuff by you to read in a fandom I know!

I see your point about "fewer", but I'm going to be the temperamental artist and leave it my way for rhythm and consistency.

Not a problem. Just saying. :-)

but if you WANT to be my regular beta again, just say so...LOL

SO! So! SO SO SO SO! ::waves arms around::

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katcorvi November 22 2009, 20:40:09 UTC
Lovely! So what if it's Sam/Daniel? I can live with that because this piece is gorgeous. And it's Sam/Daniel, which is almost as good as Sam/Jack, except when it's better, which this is *g*

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rowan_d November 23 2009, 00:38:46 UTC
which is almost as good as Sam/Jack, except when it's better, which this is *g*

Wow, did you just say that? LOL I am everso flattered.:)

Glad you liked this (and I promise, there REALLY is S/J on the way, too :))

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rowan_d November 23 2009, 00:39:19 UTC
So...really it's only Pete you hate, hunh.... ;) ::ducks and runs::

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katcorvi November 23 2009, 01:03:51 UTC
Gah! You are so evil to torment me with that icon. Yes, Pete the Stalker. Developmentally he might have been great for Sam, but what a poor choice of boyfriends.

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ziparumpazoo November 22 2009, 22:24:25 UTC
I am usually hesitant about Sam/Daniel fic, but this... I buy this - it sounds so much like post-ascended Daniel. Lovely visuals you've created here as well. :)

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rowan_d November 23 2009, 00:58:45 UTC
I know how you feel. For the longest time I was all Sam/Jack, and I loved the Sam/Daniel friendship, but never thought I'd see it as anything else. And then one day, it just caught fire in my head.:D Sam/Jack is definitely still my OTP (and my only choice for a long term canon pairing), but I really really enjoy S/D in fic.

Anyhow, very glad you were able to enjoy this one, anyway.:)

Thanks!

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rowan_d November 23 2009, 00:59:07 UTC
Thank you. LOL

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taliatoennien November 22 2009, 23:25:07 UTC
Soooooo beautiful. :) Even more so the second (or third, or fourth :) ) time through.

I've been meaning to ask you, what was the song? I was looking for it on itunes last night and couldn't find it.

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rowan_d November 22 2009, 23:38:41 UTC
Soooooo beautiful. :) Even more so the second (or third, or fourth :) ) time through.

Thank you.:)

I've been meaning to ask you, what was the song? I was looking for it on itunes last night and couldn't find it

Artist: Nick Cave and Warren Ellis
Album: The Assassination of Jesse James By the Coward Robert Ford (Music from the Motion Picture)
Track: 14 - Song For Bob

And iTunes had it at some point, because that's where rocketchick gifted it to me...from. LOL

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