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[rouge757]

Would anyone be willing to read and critique a story I'm thinking about submitting to Genesis. I feel like I've rambled in it and not made my point, so I'm really needing some good help and advice. PLEASE????!!! The more people that read it and give me honest feedback the better I can make it

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[swirthwein]

Sure, send it to me. swirthwein@verizon.net

[mandipandy07]

I'll read it, but I'm getting ready to head off to bed, but I promise I will read it tomorrow!! :)