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Would anyone be willing to read and critique a story I'm thinking about submitting to Genesis. I feel like I've rambled in it and not made my point, so I'm really needing some good help and advice. PLEASE????!!! The more people that read it and give me honest feedback the better I can make it.
It got chopped apart and put back together, so I'm worried about the flow of it and if it makes sense as is, and I need an outsiders opinion
Manda I already have your email address, so I took the liberty of sending it to you, but if anyone else wants to read it, please let me know, I'd really appreciate it!
It got chopped apart and put back together, so I'm worried about the flow of it and if it makes sense as is, and I need an outsiders opinion
Manda I already have your email address, so I took the liberty of sending it to you, but if anyone else wants to read it, please let me know, I'd really appreciate it!