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rosemaryandrue

A Twilight Wooing (Day 03)

Oct 09, 2006 21:04

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Title: A Twilight Wooing
Rating: PG
Words: 1285
Prompt: Vegetable wooing
Disclaimer: They belong to JKR. I’m just borrowing them.

( In Which Remus Lupin Brings Gifts… )

sirius, scarves and hats, remus

Comments 32

lyras October 10 2006, 02:58:42 UTC

“Keep it.” He had a new memory - a memory of James, and if he clung to it, it would become as solid and real as the marrow.

This is beautifully done. The flashes of memory are so vivid; I hope Sirius gets the rest of that memory back at some point!

You lightened the mood nicely at the end, too.

rosemaryandrue October 26 2006, 13:15:22 UTC

Thank you :) I'm deliberately trying to write something more poignant this time, so I'm glad it's working.

Thanks for commenting :)

melandry October 10 2006, 04:24:34 UTC

Oh wow. Until this installment, I didn't really grasp the scope and intent of this series fully. Poor Remus, and poor Sirius. This one's gonna rip my heart out, isn't it?

But beyond that, I loved the amusement value and Marauderness of the memory provided by the marrow. Excellent installment.

rosemaryandrue October 26 2006, 13:35:31 UTC

Well, I'm hoping for bittersweet rather than sheer angst, but yes, it will be more wistful than the earlier series.

There's something inherently humourous about marrows. I love them ^_^

Thanks for the comment :)

katyjo October 10 2006, 07:20:19 UTC

I'm really enjoying this - apologies for not commenting before. Can't wait to see where you take it.

rosemaryandrue October 26 2006, 15:17:46 UTC

Thank you :) Sorry it's taken me so long to reply. I've been rushed off my feet in rl.

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rosemaryandrue October 26 2006, 15:19:57 UTC

Thank you :) I'm glad you liked them - sorry it took me so horribly long to reply :(

expositionary October 15 2006, 09:01:16 UTC

Now this? This is an avenue of UST and unrequited somethings that definitely hasn't been explored enough with this pairing, and I am so glad you're writing this story.

Sorry for getting to this so late; like you, I've been busy with RL. This is a wonderful start, though, and I do hope you have time to continue it; I like the wistfulness of these scenes, Sirius' unquenchable Sirius-ness, Remus' reserve and regret.

It breaks my heart, but there's so, so much hope. Lovely. ♥

rosemaryandrue October 26 2006, 16:16:22 UTC

Thank you :) I really wanted to tackle something wistful and autumnal and this period is neglected a little.

I'm glad you liked it - thanks for commenting. I won't finish on time, but I will keep at it slowly.