Poetic Licence Revoked

[rosedraquia]

Ok, so I may have randomly had some rhyming moments this month, and wrote a pair of really crappy poems. The thing is, I'm actually quite interested in what anyone has to say about them, so I'll put them up and hope I don't get ripped to pieces. :) And just in case anyone asks, I didn't write them based on any particular situation or anything, I

Comments

[nightphonix]

Hmm...not bad(the first one), the second one is a bit to modern for my taste(but if you like this kind of poems it's okey).