This is my favourite line. I was disappointed that the story ended (I was reading it on AO3) unitl I read this. :)
Wow, I adore this story. I really like the way you've used canon, twisted it just enough to suit your needs and it works so very well in this world that you've built. The dynamic between the characters feels true to the canon dynamics, and again is enough of twist from canon to make them your own. I hope to reread, digest and enjoy the story all over again in the very near future. I look forward to reading the sequel when it's done.
I just finished to read it, and wah! That's really an excellent fic, I LOVE the world you created with all the political issues and their shared past! Every characers are very IC and I was sooo happy that Will that here too! ♥ I love him, it's good to see him in some fics now and again! Arthur was a utter prat at first, I could hardly believe it XD But the way their relationship changes is just precious ♥ I absolutely can't wait for the arc 2 :D And I'm totally reccing this fic ♥
fair warning: long comment is long, and maybe incoherentaeternitasbeachSeptember 6 2010, 21:16:34 UTC
So now that I am in proper reader/fangirl mode, I have to say:
This has to be one of the most consistent, evenly-spread characterized fics I've come across in that I marvel at how you've fleshed out the people we barely met in canon and made them so tangible and believable. Every. Single. One. I could hear all their voices in my head perfectly--the heart, the sarcasm, the lightness, the pain. Balinor, oh my heart! And Hunith with her strength! And Viviane, whom I adored! And Lancelot, who was so quiet but solid and present! I lovedlovedloved how you wrote every single person in this, felt I could get inside their heads and understand their motivations for everything.
And the narrative overall--so mythical and expertly woven. You make storytelling seem effortless [and I'm crazyjealous because I wish I could plot like that, especially in canon-verse, and so intricately and seamlessly too]. I know during the course of my editing I was drawing hearts around all the shippy stuff but I think your execution of everything, from the fight
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This is my favourite line. I was disappointed that the story ended (I was reading it on AO3) unitl I read this. :)
Wow, I adore this story. I really like the way you've used canon, twisted it just enough to suit your needs and it works so very well in this world that you've built. The dynamic between the characters feels true to the canon dynamics, and again is enough of twist from canon to make them your own. I hope to reread, digest and enjoy the story all over again in the very near future. I look forward to reading the sequel when it's done.
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This has to be one of the most consistent, evenly-spread characterized fics I've come across in that I marvel at how you've fleshed out the people we barely met in canon and made them so tangible and believable. Every. Single. One. I could hear all their voices in my head perfectly--the heart, the sarcasm, the lightness, the pain. Balinor, oh my heart! And Hunith with her strength! And Viviane, whom I adored! And Lancelot, who was so quiet but solid and present! I lovedlovedloved how you wrote every single person in this, felt I could get inside their heads and understand their motivations for everything.
And the narrative overall--so mythical and expertly woven. You make storytelling seem effortless [and I'm crazyjealous because I wish I could plot like that, especially in canon-verse, and so intricately and seamlessly too]. I know during the course of my editing I was drawing hearts around all the shippy stuff but I think your execution of everything, from the fight ( ... )
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