Fic: Sentire (7/9)

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Title: Sentire (7/9)
Author: Ella Jane
Characters: Nine/Rose, Jack
Chapter Rating: PG-13
Series Rating: NC-17
Timeline: AU from The Doctor Dances
A/N: Once again, I feel a need to comment about the awesomeness of the people who are following this fic. Given that I have such a small body of work, I was never expecting the number of readers/comments I've

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[dark_aegis]

*flails*

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*realises the next chapter's not up yet*

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Dangit! I. Must. Know. What. Happens. Next!

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(Yes, I'll be doing this for a while ;))

Anyway, real review. Wow. Just wow. Rose is, of course, hurt. Jack's advice is brilliant and I love his confrontation of the Doctor, but then the tub scene. OMG the tub scene. Rose is so hurt and the Doctor's so the Doctor and he ends up hurting her and and...is it tomorrow yet?

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[roquentine]

This is really just ridiculously flattering. Thank you. :) The only thing I can promise is that Part Eight WILL go up before 9pm Eastern tomorrow night. I felt bad that it was so late tonight!

[transcendancing]

What you said!

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Hmmm... I have this weird urge to post the next chapter tonight! But alas, I must resist. :) My apologies, and thank you so much for reading!

[wendymr]

Ow.

Ow, that hurt. And right now, you know, I really, really dislike the Doctor. Rose is right:
"You are a self-centered bastard. All that happened is I got shoved out of my own mind for a while, all that happened is I thought I was dying, and of course, you did that, but yeah, I can wait as long as you like to find out why."

"It's not like that."

"Of course it's like that. We do everything on your time, don't we, Time Lord?" She spat out his title with bitter venom. He sighed deeply, rubbing his forehead in frustration, and realized when he looked back up at her what a mistake that was. Her eyes were wide with shock and hurt. "And I'm so sorry if my silly questions have annoyed you," she scoffed. "How stupidly human of me to expect that you'd actually tell me what I needed to know just because I asked."Yeah. And right now I think there's no better option for her than to pack, collect Jack and for the two of them to leave and find a ship of their own to travel through time and space with

[roquentine]

Yeah, you've got quite a bit of convincing to do to prove to me that the right ending for this story isn't for Rose and Jack to leave together...

Yikes! The pressure! I will do my best! Don't give up on my Nine just yet... ;)

I really cannot wait to do the post-game on this story, even if no one else finds it interesting. I'm dying to talk about this stuff, but I just can't until it's all out there! :)

[larielromeniel]

I'm very interested in the post-game! To me, the process is just as fascinating as the story.

[dragonmom64]

Owwww, the pain, the pain....it just bleeds off the page!
Must know more....

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[roquentine]

It sounds awful to say that I'm glad people are feeling the pain, but I sort of am! At any rate, I appreciate the comment. :) Thank you for reading!

[honorh]

Wow. It's going to be a tense time on the TARDIS, isn't it? I have a feeling the Doctor's cut off for the time being--and will be until he gets it together and tells Rose the truth. Which is . . ?

[roquentine]

It sure does seem like he needs some serious punishment, huh? I sort of like wendymr's idea of Jack and Rose taking off, and leaving him stuck on Earth to work in a chip shop or something. (Not that that's what happens to him here.) (Maybe.) :)