[Uraboku] Bruises and Bitemarks (3/?)

[rooftop_sakura]

Title: Bruises and Bitemarks
Author: masanami
Character(s): Hotsuma/Shusei, mentions of Senshirou/Kuroto, Takashiro, Tachibana, and others
Word Count: 6,200
Rating: R
Warnings: Host AU. Suggestive material.
Summary: Shusei's the perfect host and Hotsuma's the perfect person to ruin everything for him.
Author's Note: Sorry for the delay in getting this out

Comments

[blpower]

Ahhhhhhhhhhh, how WONDERFUL !!! Il LOVE the way Shusei is facinated by Hotsuma's hair and how he felf different with him. Shusei try to stay away from Hotsuma but simply can't, ah boys !!! And Hotsuma who don't know exactly the feelings of Shusei for him, an Shusei who can't act with Hotsuma like the other customers... It's almost like I can feel the sensations of Hotsuma and Shuei, too great !! Ah, again once, your fic is amazing !

I'm sorry but I can't do a real commentary, because I'm REALY busy. Indeed since 3 weeks I go to bed at 3 am for next wake up at 7 am, just in order to do my homeworks... My body can't bear this any longer... You cannot imagine how your fic give me a surge of energy, tank you so much, it helps me a lot to not sink in... What ? maybe in the depths of despair because even if I work like a degenerate, I'm not sure to have a result... Well, I must return to work, so please forgive me because I haven't the time to do a commentary worthy of you. And thank you. Thank you.

[masanami]

waaahh ♥ !! Thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed this chapter--all the nuances and feelings that are floating between Hotsuma and Shusei, their fascination and their confusion in the relationship they've built together so far--it really touches me that you've seen and liked those things. Especially so, that you took the time to read and comment on this story when you're obviously so busy with school and other things in life. It makes my day that you were able to take a moment and read this and enjoy it^^ Thank you for that <3

[ravanna]

Oooh, I was so waiting for an update, as you know, and here we are, here it is, and my darling, this was such a beautiful read again

[masanami]

Oh Ravanna, darling, you know your opinion means the world to me. When I read your comments I always see how much thought and love you put into your words--how you love reading just as much as you love writing--and I SO appreciate that. I really, truly, do

[ravanna]

And I am more than happy that my words mean so much to you, too, kinda influencing you

[masanami]

For the same reasons you pointed out that this IS Shusei's world and his values and morals that are moving the timeflow and story--it's so different from the Shusei we know in canon who cannot make those moves (and maybe I am pointing out my own flaws, maybe not, since we present these same personalities in a different light and a different background, not tied together by a past and destiny that has bound them together)--but still. It is this Shusei and his speed and his knowledge that drives his actions. ahhh but I do SO love discussing and thinking about it--maybe breaking it apart and seeing its flaws but still loving it on a whole.

♥ ♥ ♥

[tsubakig]

Aw hon...this is such an amazing chapter!♥

I love the interaction of the boys from the beginning till the end, the description of each scene, the action and thoughts, they are just soo lovely! My eyes just couldnt get off the screen until i finished reading everything! The scene is like THERE in front of me. its just so THERE.

There wasn’t any hesitation, not really, just the sharp intake of oxygen to begin his words. “You are my everything.”
Aw~sweet >w<

“Then stay.” It’s all Hotsuma has to say, words mumbled into his hair.“Then stay.” It’s all Hotsuma has to say, words mumbled into his hair.
*melts*

I have to say, it's a nice way to start my Monday! (Morning lectures starts in 9 hours time >w<)

*Hugs* ^-^

[masanami]

Thank you so much darling!

I am glad this was a good way to start your Monday, though, yuck, classes! lol Knowing you see the scenes and can feel the scenes just means so much to me. Sometimes I wonder if their world is only one I can see--but hearing, getting confirmation that other people see it as well--really is an amazing thing. Especially since I SO adorable our boys and this world I've tangled them in ♥

[mitsu_san]

[The other man may not be that much taller than him but it felt like Hotsuma’s towering over him.]

<33333333

[because Hotsuma is here and Hotsuma has a habit of taking over all his thoughts.]

He sure does :333

Oh wow, this was really tense. I love how they ended up at Hotsuma's place and how Shusei let himself drown into this pleasure and yet, he still fears and all he did was pleasing Hotsuma as he would do to all the other women. But then, Hotsu is someone totally different, aww ;_; - I love that line. Shusei's train of thoughts were confusing and messy but that's all him, uncertainty and fear that is eating him up. The smut scene was yummy despite the angsty atmosphere ♥.

aww the whole conversation afterwards totally broke me. It tore me up~~ I'm glad to see Shusei in Hotsuma's arms in the end, sob sob. that made it all bittersweet <3

Aww thank you for the update ;__; <3
I can't wait for a happy ending already, hahah

*HUGS*

[masanami]

*glomps*

I'm so glad you enjoyed the new chapter Mitsu-chan! I wasn't really anticipating everything that I put into this chapter...not when I first had an idea where I was heading...but I really loved what this chapter added to the story...my favorite parts were them going into the part as well so I'm glad you liked those scenes :)

Hopefully Shusei's confusing thoughts were too much and didn't affect the readability of the story in and of itself^^

Aww thank you for darling for the kind words! I don't think it will be a very long wait before the next update^^

♥

[white_cross_b]

I was so happy to finally see a new chapter this morning, but I didn't have time to leave feedback until now. I'm so glad you posted! You know what I loved the most? Well, besides everything, that is. I love how you worked this in:

“You…you are all I think about.”

YES! That made me so happy.

I'm glad to see things are moving along because of course we want our boys to end up happy together, right?

[masanami]

Awww dear thank you for coming back and commenting! ♥ that is so kind of you :)

Shusei is always thinking about Hotsuma and that line is so perfect to simply describe the way Shusei feels! I'm glad you enjoyed that one^^ and of course, progression is always good, especially since I still have a lot more planned for the boys <33