Last of the kisses!

May 02, 2011 19:39

For ioanite who requested Horatio/Barbara:

Horatio/Barbara )

ficlet - 05/11, hornblower

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eglantine_br May 3 2011, 02:52:36 UTC
Oh, so sweet. She does love him just a little, doesn't she? And he is recognizably dorky and lovable.

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romanticalgirl May 8 2011, 06:01:14 UTC
I think she does - just because they were a good match for each other politically and socially, doesn't mean that there wasn't at least a little bit of love.

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ioanite May 3 2011, 03:55:53 UTC
Yay! You wrote it! And it's lovely. Especially this part:

For some reason, today he has brought the box into the sitting room, turning it carefully in his hands. They are long-fingered and steady, callused and marked with ink. She loves his hands

I adore Horatio's/Ioan's hands too. They're so beautifully expressive.

And I mean, Yes, Horatio's a grumpy sod, but he's so endearing sometimes. You captured that beautifully in your fic.

Long story short: Thank you, It's great!

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romanticalgirl May 8 2011, 06:01:55 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. He's kind of ridiculous, but I love him a lot. Oh, Hornblower.

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eglantine_br May 4 2011, 02:36:22 UTC
Do you want to put it on Following Sea?

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anteros_lmc May 6 2011, 23:05:42 UTC
Awwww that's lovely! I adore Barbara in this :)

Like eglantine_br said, would you mind if I cross posted this to following sea?

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romanticalgirl May 8 2011, 06:02:28 UTC
I'm glad you enjoyed it!

(sure go ahead and post a link if you'd like!)

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anteros_lmc May 8 2011, 16:34:35 UTC
Thank you so much! I've cross posted here. I hope you don't mind but I've also cross posted Troubled Waters. Your Hornblower fic gets reccd on a regular basis over at following_sea so these are a real treat! Thank you again :)

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romanticalgirl May 9 2011, 05:11:42 UTC
Thanks for reccing/posting them!

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shezzawatto May 9 2011, 07:17:50 UTC
Long time since I've read any of your stuff, romanticalgirl. I see the talent hasn't waned. Lovely vignette, and very in character. Thank you.

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romanticalgirl May 9 2011, 16:23:26 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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