Ficlet: Jayne/Kaylee

Jul 01, 2008 13:40

Title: When Cobb met Fry
Author: Romanceguru
Disclaimer: Joss is the boss of me.
Rating: PG
Characters/Pairing: Pre-Jaylee & Wash (end of days type behavior? I think so…)
Prompt: “She'd never been afraid of either him; or his guns.”
Timeline: Pre-Series, when Jayne first boards.
A/N: Written for 
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jaylee, jayne, fic, kaylee, wash, firefly

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alsunwunderland July 2 2008, 01:20:14 UTC
I really enjoyed this. Lil Kaylee seems to have the power to make anyone feel welcome. Also, I love fanfic where Wash is still alive & well. :)

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romanceguru July 2 2008, 05:14:44 UTC
This is true, it’s her gift.

Any chance to through Wash in the mix, right? *cuddles him*

Thanks muchly. : )

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bookaddict43 July 2 2008, 01:26:31 UTC
See! I told you could do it!

You did very well! :D I like the to and fro between Kaylee and Wash, there's some very cute lines there. I love Wash's manly alphabetising of his dinosaurs! So cute :D

Kaylee is so her with her belief in everything shiny and her not biting comment! And I love Jayne's gruffnes *snuggles him*.

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romanceguru July 2 2008, 05:12:03 UTC
I’ve arrived at nirvana. ;-p Anything for you, babe.

As I said to Elsi, I love the idea of an even more barbaric Jayne when he first comes aboard. *grrr* Plus, there's contrast, which I love.

Anyways, you likey. Yay!

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bookaddict43 July 2 2008, 06:40:43 UTC
Barbaric Jayne is very grrr worthy *nods*. I'm glad I helped you toward Nirvana! *giggles*

Now I have to slowly coax you to read some Jaylee *rubs hands together*.

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romanceguru July 3 2008, 05:21:25 UTC
Baby steps, love. ;-p

If I ever get the itch, I’ll have you rec me some. Maybe something angsty if it exists.

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guinny_hamilton July 2 2008, 09:06:03 UTC
My favorite line: Wash lifted a hand, spreading his fingers. “Greetings, sizeable one. We come in peace.”

But the thing as a whole is just SO amusing and fun and cute and yes, awesome!!

I need more Marcus/Jessica from you ;-) Please?

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romanceguru July 3 2008, 05:25:28 UTC
Glad you liked that line! And well, the whole thing. : )

I guess Wash is my comic relief guy because I can’t seem to write a fic centering around him. *puzzles*

More M/J in the future maybe. I have to get my ass in gear and finish M/R! That chap doesn’t want to cooperate! Maybe I need to go stab something? ;-p

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romanceguru July 3 2008, 05:28:41 UTC
*pets Jayne* We never really wanted him for his overabundance of brains, did we?

I think we miss Wash because there was still so much potential for his character. I actually see him going in a more angsty type direction had he lived. But that’s just the Whedon variable.

Who knows? If inspiration strikes, anything’s possible. Glad you liked it.

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little_dumpling July 2 2008, 17:24:39 UTC
awwes! i love it! *hugs the fic* great characterizations! i could see the scene playing out perfectly in my head! *squirms happily* kaylee is such a cutie!

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romanceguru July 3 2008, 05:43:49 UTC
Isn’t she? : D

I’m glad you liked the characterizations. It’s the reason my fic is usually made up of dialogue. I can’t get enough of their language, the way they communicate with one another.

Thanks!

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