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Nov 30, 2011 23:59

Hahahahahhaha. I haven't updated in five weeks and I'm under quarantine from fun while I do my grad school apps, so obviously I've spent the last day writing schmoopy Star Trek reboot fic and realized it had been so long since I'd written a fic about sober people that I'm not even sure how to anymore. How do u sober. This is a story about a great ( Read more... )

fic, space married!, i need a star trek icon, embarrassed at my life

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illariy December 1 2011, 21:46:57 UTC
Delicious story! I really like all the thoughts on what makes a home. Beautiful writing, too. Thank you so much for sharing. :D

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romancandles December 2 2011, 18:55:46 UTC
Thank you so much for reading and commenting! ♥

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siluria December 1 2011, 22:34:56 UTC
This is really beautiful. I love that Jim just starts to settle himself in and never considers going anywhere else *happy sigh*

“That first time we came here,” he says and it’s a testament to how repressed Bones is that a flush is creeping up his neck. “I had everything I needed.”

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romancandles December 2 2011, 18:56:50 UTC
How could Jim go anywhere but where Bones is? I like the idea of Bones following Jim into space and Jim following Bones back to earth too. Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to comment!

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animesiren December 1 2011, 22:52:07 UTC
This was really great!

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romancandles December 2 2011, 18:57:05 UTC
Thank you! :D

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the_archandroid December 2 2011, 02:24:35 UTC
Bones, predictably, rolls over before Jim’s even finished unpacking the bag. The guy’s got a superpower for ducking the tab.

I don't know what it is about this line but i just ADORE IT TO PIECES!! it just seems so RIGHT for Bones, it seems perfect and it doesn't say alot, but it says EVERYTHING about his character... i dunno, this line really spoke to me for some reason.

Christ do I really have to spell this out to you?” Bones props himself up on one elbow. “That first time we came here,” he says and it’s a testament to how repressed Bones is that a flush is creeping up his neck. “I had everything I needed.” Why. why did you decide to kill me with this PERFECT perfect line? oh bones!!! you repressed beautiful man, i LOVE that jim is the one who's more emotionally savvy and bones is simple in the needs he has, all he needs is jim. I loved this story so much, it is EXACTLY what i think of when i think of Jim and Bones' dynamic. contentious and fun and sweet and sexy and just necessary.

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romancandles December 2 2011, 18:58:43 UTC
Thank you! I was a little worried about that line but I kind of picture Bones at the dude that always orders the cheapest booze and ever volunteers to pick up the tab, but if you're short on rent or need to get your bike fixed, Bones'll lend you the money and never bring it up again. Thank you so much for reading and commenting!

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secretsolitaire December 2 2011, 03:56:23 UTC
Eeee, I have so much love for this. I love their fight and the whole dynamic you've established for them. The detail of Bones growing up in a high-rise made me smile, as it's so against fanon for him, and I liked that he recognized Jim's taste in furniture. ♥♥

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romancandles December 2 2011, 18:59:42 UTC
LOL this whole fic is just my internal Bones going, "I'm a doctor in the fucking future Jim, not some country hick in 1954!" Thank you so much for reading and commenting!

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