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grimorie February 29 2008, 02:44:58 UTC
Oh, this is fabulous. So many things here, unsaid and said.

“Three weeks isn’t sticking, Crews,” no matter how great the sex may be, “it’s still gum on the shoe, compared to the breadth of any timescale.” Geological, cosmic…

Oh, Dani... She's still so damaged and cynical *pets*

A *big* secret. Then he sees her sliding her shirt on - right next to his knife - so he doesn’t say anything.

Gah. This hurts. This two, really, break the heart they do.

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I'm entirely too smiley for my own good right now :D rodlox February 29 2008, 03:19:04 UTC
thank you.

damaged and cynical, yep - like they are at present...in keeping with the request. ;D
(of course, my Dani muse attributes the bit about timescales to being around Crews too much)
:)

the last bit, about the shirt and the knife - I was thinking that he figured a big secret would win that last bit of her that was wavering...then, between the sight of Dani dressing & a worry about the damage Dani could do to him with his knife...he shuts up.

(of course, my Crews muse might have kept that from being evident, dang him!)
;)

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elliesmeow March 19 2008, 04:15:49 UTC
Sweet! I love all the ambiguous possibilities.

-Ellie

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rodlox March 19 2008, 04:54:31 UTC
*is pleased you like*

wait - "ambiguous"?

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elliesmeow March 19 2008, 23:18:09 UTC
You heard me. Ambiguous!:P

-Ellie

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rodlox March 19 2008, 23:35:39 UTC
if I may ask, how/where is it ambiguous?

I'm not cross - I'm just curious.

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