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Primevalathon: "The Horseman Connor"

Oct 31, 2009 01:06

Title: The Horseman ConnorAuthor: Keenir ( Read more... )

tetrapod zoology, primeval, primeval fanfiction, ficathon

Comments 11

curia_regis October 31 2009, 09:12:23 UTC

Aww, Connor and Abby are adorable together.

Fail Jello. An ocean of it.

I love that line!

talliw October 31 2009, 10:12:57 UTC

That's a very unusually idea.
The image of an ocean of Jello is rather horrible.*shudders*

dominique012 October 31 2009, 11:10:55 UTC

Fail jello is brilliant. You write the two of them beautifully, and I love the flow of all the action. :) Really entertaining.

a breathing terrestrial groundcover evolved from cancer Ew. That is brilliant, unique, and kind of gross! :D Poor Connor. :D

prochytes October 31 2009, 12:04:39 UTC

Connor Temple's good intentions had homogenized the Earth

That, I think, is one of the best Primeval lines I have ever read. And it is a tremendous concept.

PS Do you welcome typo lists? There are a number I spotted.

rodlox October 31 2009, 16:04:40 UTC

why thank you. (on both counts)

and I welcome typo lists. (I changed Abby's ?" to a ." which it should've been)...I swear, some days I think Babnol's asleep when she's awake. :)

prochytes October 31 2009, 17:54:26 UTC

its my fault it's my fault

jaws. jaws."

aqcuiesced acquiesced

ocassional occasional

italics mark-up goes odd near the end

fredbassett October 31 2009, 12:09:08 UTC

Fail Jello. An ocean of it.

YUK!!

It conjures up rather weird mental pictures, for sure.