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lsellersfic October 31 2009, 15:50:53 UTC
Fail Jello. An ocean of it.

What a great line! Nice story.

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reggietate October 31 2009, 18:42:51 UTC
Eerie and interesting. Poor Connor, but at least he has Abby for consolation :-)

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knitekat October 31 2009, 22:47:41 UTC
Meep for poor Connor, knowing he's caused it, though he has at least got Abby with him. Love the fail jello lines.

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szychogirl November 2 2009, 00:17:42 UTC
Connor tries and yet somehow, all too often, he messes things up.

Okay, Connor thought to himself, putting an arm around Abby, maybe this isn't so bad after all.
ahh, Reaping the benefits from his mistake. I hope he enjoys it while it lasts.

Great concept and well written. I quite enjoyed :)

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