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[rodlox]

picked up from Aelfgyfu Mead -

Give me the title of a story I've never written, and feedback telling me what you liked best about it, and I will tell you any of: the first sentence, the last sentence, the thing that made me want to write it, the biggest problem I had while writing it, why it almost never got posted, the scene that hit the cutting

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[mustangcandi]

You know, I have to admit... I was a little hesitant when I let you borrow Callie for your alternate universe fic and you ended up pairing her with Don, but after reading - I'm so glad she was on loan. In my version of reality, she and Don make a great team as FBI partners... but in your alternate universe, where she and Don are partners in crime (literally) like a modern day Bonnie and Clyde - the combination is nearly explosive (as Charlie - the Special Agent in Charge and his team soon found out.) The combination of Don's knowledge of law enforcement procedural's and Callie's knowledge of chemistry, math and algorithms (is it just me or is it a complete turn on that you've made her one of the best computer hackers in the world?) was just out of this world. And then, the passion between them when the job is successful... guh. This was a complete 180 from the world I'm used to in Numb3rs and with Callie and damn, it was so much fun to read. Sequel? Yes, please. :)