You've Become What I Hate, Sold Yourself For A Bit Of Fame: Chapter Twenty-Three

[roctodwho]

Summary: Alex has just moved for the last of many times to Dulaney High school. He has decided that this is the year and school that he will try and become "popular" but if that happened would it be a bad thing? And will finding a new friend, that may think of him as more, also affect it

Comments

[yzziiatlxo]

i love this! its cute to read the memories from alexs pov. excited to see whats gonns happen :D

[roctodwho]

thank you! glad you think so(:

[mcrway]

I really should be sleeping too but I can't because ANOTHER CHAPTER YES.

"No thank you big boobed lady." I can't stop laughing at that sentence idk I'm tired and it was fun. :D
The bar scene was cute, they had their first kiss and all. Such a shame Jack doesn't remember it.

This chapter was great, like always. It was maybe even better than the last one 'cause this had so many nice memories and I liked the ending too. Hopefully Alex and Jack will talk on Monday. :3

I want to be best friends with Jack ugh Alex why did you decide to become popular, you lost a perfect friend. Plus apparently you lost Josh too, that's sad. :(

But I just wanted to say that I like these fillers a lot and I hope we get more of these at some point. :) Yes I do like drama but it's nice to read something "lighter" sometimes.

[roctodwho]

Aw I'm flattered that you're giving up precious sleep to read this haha(:

And oh my god I know, I couldn't stop laughing either cos I was tired when I wrote it! But yeah, I liked that scene, and it was more to show that Alex remembered it and was still thinking about it than to be like an actual step in their relationship so I didn't want Jack to remember cos I'm evil.

Thank you(: I figured the last one was lacking flashbacks so I added a lot more in this one and I really liked writing it. And you'll have to see what happens(;

I know, Jack is perfect haha And Alexs a douche now so he doesn't really notice that he's alienating people, which yeah, is pretty sad.

I seriously will consider doing more like this because I don't want a story thats just done and not all that realistic, plus they're fun to write(:

[mcrway]

Apparently I didn't have enough sleep 'cause school started two hours ago and I just woke up. But it's fine, I rather read fanfiction than go to sleep haha.

Oh that makes sense! And I do like the fact that Alex is the one who still remembers it and thinks about it. Yes you're very evil haha. But it's totally fine, as a writer sometimes you just have to be. :D

[roctodwho]

That's not good! But I completely understand haha

I wanted to show that even though he acts douche-like most of the time, he hasn't gone over to the dark side 100 percent. And, yes, I am, but I agree, it comes with the title of author! (:

[broken_capulet]

The flashbacks were so cute <33 my favorite chapter so far!

[roctodwho]

Thank you! I try(:

[layero69]

Aw omg he remembered everything and he kind of knows that he was doing the wrong thing by striving for popularity by jacks face but he doesn't really acknowledge it. Poor Jacky.

[roctodwho]

Thanks for all of your comments! And I know, I feel bad for Jack too and it kills me having to write things against him, but it has to be done!