Faith Fanfic Part III

[rockharlequin]

Soooo... I'm splitting the last chapter into two, so this is turning into a four-parter (approximately).
EDIT: I don't know why LJ keeps on erasing the spaces after my paragraphs, so just ignore it and mentally insert spaces <333

Comments and the lot welcome~

Comments

[joonni]

I thinking about creating a post linking to these faith fanfics on livejournal. Would you mind if I linked to yours?

[rockharlequin]

Oh, I don't mind at all, please go ahead ^u^~

[scottishlass]

And when I was 3, I was given a pet turtle as a present, and I named it Lady Choi after my aunt because I love her so much and she is an elder...
OMG! This killed me .. I can so see him sitting there pouting trying to get back into the good graces of the Jade Emperor and all the other gods trying to find good deeds.

You really have to continue this, it's funny, it has the right sexual tension. One thing though that made me go a bit HUH? Is that when you write Choi Young's thoughts he is much too docile. So yeah he is afraid of Eun Soo (esp. for her) but he is also a warrior who could snap her neck like a twig, and he knows it (even though he would never do this). He would be gruffer I think, but that is only my own personal opinion :)
I love this!!

[rockharlequin]

Thankies so much for your kind words. I understand what you're saying, and I'm not exactly trying to defend my writing, but here's what I was thinking: He canna snap her neck because that would be killing himself at the same time, and he's been gruff to her all the way, only I was just too lazy to go into much detail about it (I think I wrote like... 1 long line about their 2nd day of riding, and that was it) xP. Only, now, he's done something wrong.. and not small wrong like oops I ate your food, but big wrong, aka oops I married us without even your knowing. I mean, even if it Goryeo, land of the arranged marriages, the women still knew that they were going to get married, or were able to tell from the ceremonies, and Eun Soo could do neither. And on top of that, she's coming, not from, say the 18th century, where arranged marriages were a regular thing, but the 21st century, which has dating and proposals and the bride making a big deal and planning her own wedding and the size of her ring mattering... Although she got Choi Young

[anonymous]

LOVED IT~! :)

[rockharlequin]

Merci beaucoup cherie <3333 *squish*

Your story about CY and ES

[anonymous]

Bonjour

Re: Your story about CY and ES

[anonymous]

OK, my comment was in response to Scottishglass ( I think) and I just read her comment and I now see what she meant but I do like your response to her and it makes sense.
Personally, when they are in an intimate place like the bedroom, I do want CY to be scared of her and feel intimidated some because he is not used to being with women in that way, and so emotionally, that could also be overwhelming for him as well (just a thought).

Again, I just love the CY you write about. You are so witty and funny and you make him funny and quirky, I like that. Please, keep that up, thank you!!!!!

Re: Your story about CY and ES

[anonymous]

Hi, I wanted to apologize. I misspelled Scottishlass name. I wrote Scottishglass instead of Scottishlass and I just wanted to apologize about that.

Re: Your story about CY and ES

[rockharlequin]

Hey, I'm sorry about replying so late, but err.. you know what they say: real life sucks. Ok, so maybe only I say that, whatever.

Don't worry over everything, over here we love some good discussions and polite disagreements, and a little bit of forgetfullness and typos are totally overlooked <3

Thankies so much for taking the time to write such a detailed post with such lovely compliments. In fact, you're making me want to go and type the rest of the fic right now, leaving this reply in the lurch (not happening though, made you wait long enough xP).

I really like how you actually wrote what I was trying to convey much much better than me. Gosh, I'm bad with words aren't I?

Not only that, but I have always seen CY as this very accomplished warrior who is wrapped around ES's finger, simply because he loves her, very much and he loves having her around, even though he might not tell her that, at first. I see CY as someone who has a lot of responsibilities and who carries them all, but he totally melts when it comes to ES and becomes

Loved it...please continue!!!!!!

[anonymous]

Thanks for writing this...i loved it!!!! Please do more...PLEASE!!!

Re: Loved it...please continue!!!!!!

[rockharlequin]

Ahaha, Thank you so much, I wrote the last part to it now ^u^