Faith Fanfic Part III

[rockharlequin]

Soooo... I'm splitting the last chapter into two, so this is turning into a four-parter (approximately).
EDIT: I don't know why LJ keeps on erasing the spaces after my paragraphs, so just ignore it and mentally insert spaces <333

Comments and the lot welcome~

Comments

[rockharlequin]

Thankies so much for your kind words. I understand what you're saying, and I'm not exactly trying to defend my writing, but here's what I was thinking: He canna snap her neck because that would be killing himself at the same time, and he's been gruff to her all the way, only I was just too lazy to go into much detail about it (I think I wrote like... 1 long line about their 2nd day of riding, and that was it) xP. Only, now, he's done something wrong.. and not small wrong like oops I ate your food, but big wrong, aka oops I married us without even your knowing. I mean, even if it Goryeo, land of the arranged marriages, the women still knew that they were going to get married, or were able to tell from the ceremonies, and Eun Soo could do neither. And on top of that, she's coming, not from, say the 18th century, where arranged marriages were a regular thing, but the 21st century, which has dating and proposals and the bride making a big deal and planning her own wedding and the size of her ring mattering... Although she got Choi Young in the bargain, so she oughtn't exactly be too traumatised... So yeah, he does seem a little OOC, but I want to keep him on his toes. Trying to be manly and failing Choi Young was always funniest to me xP