Fic: Five Times

[rock_mafia]

Title: Five Times
Genre: Family
Characters: John Sheppard, Rodney McKay, Teyla Emmagen, Torren John Emmagen, Ronon Dex
Word Count: ~600
Disclaimer: Don't own it.
Excerpt: The first time Torren John is left in John and Rodney’s (mostly attentive) care, he’s handed back to Teyla at the end of the night in roughly the same condition as she’d left him.

Comments

[popkin16]

Aww. You know it must have hurt Teyla that he doesn't recognize her in some way. I'm glad that he's always happy and sleep when she goes to pick him up. He'll grow up being very, very loved XD

Rodney + John + baby = *dead from cute*

[rock_mafia]

I was always annoyed with the ending of SGA just because Teyla's HERE and Torren is THERE AND OMG WTF??!?!?! I can't imagine she'd be stuck on Earth though because I think they'd do everything they could to get her back, so hopefully THAT Teyla didn't have to go through that hurt! :D

Thank you so much for commenting.

[popkin16]

Oh god, don't read the books. Seriously, they will piss you off. According to the books, Atlantis does go back to Pegasus, where Rodney is kidnapped by the wraith. At the end of book one, Teyla and Kanaan break up, Kanaan taking Torren with him (AWAY from Teyla, and who gives up her husband and child like that?) And then, in the second book, instead of working to find Rodney (who is apparently turned into a Wraith, fuck those authors), she and John have sex.

*grinds teeth* I might be just a little angry. A little.

I LIKE THIS MUCH BETTER ♥ ♥ You're so welcome, bb. You deserve loads of comments!

Dear God *Gasp* Nooo! Rant

[mckay_s_geek]

O.o WTF were they thinking those evil SGA published writers. They ignore Rodney and Teyla gives Torren up that's just wrong (She'd fight tooth and nail for him). Though, I just might read to see if they turn it around at some point.

[omg_wtf_yeah]

Dude, this is not disappointing at all. It's really sweet and lovely. ♥

[rock_mafia]

Thank you very much :) ♥

[mckay_s_geek]

Aww *tears* I promised I wouldn't cry but hey happy tears. I love this fic.

[rock_mafia]

Thank you :) Hope you're doing well.

[mckay_s_geek]

I'm good. I defiantly feel large and in charge @ 21 1/2 wks lol. The twins are kicking and taking jabs here and there too. Finding names is tough at the moment our list has doubled for girl names but, I've cut the boys names down to a page and a half.

[enigmaticblues]

I really loved this, although it makes me sniffle a little. (Seriously, I prefer to believe that Kanaan and Torren were on Atlantis when they had to come back to Earth. In my head, that's how it happened.)

[rock_mafia]

I'm sorry it made you sniffle! Thank you for commenting!

[rock_mafia]

But then it got a little happy! Right???

Thanks for commenting :)