My God, You're Like A Living Wrecking Ball.

Dec 16, 2010 09:51

Every time I talk to Gus about H50, I end up writing something cracked out and ridiculous, and you'd think I'd know better by now, but I clearly never learn. Luckily for me, she was kind enough to edit this madness and took out all my unnecessary adverbs and generally made it a better story. And then I wrote stuff in after she was done and probably ( Read more... )

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iamrosalita December 16 2010, 15:58:34 UTC
Hahahahaha! Poor Danny. Steve's been a violation of due process lawsuit looking for a place to happen since day 1, and now Kono's in on the act.

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robanybody December 17 2010, 01:25:18 UTC
Seriously, Kono and Steve are TERRIFYING together. Danny's life is totally fucked.

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lillian13 December 16 2010, 16:28:31 UTC
OMG, poor Danny. I would hate to be his doctor. "Why isn't the blood pressure medication I gave you working?" "Because my high blood pressure cause isn't medical, it's called STEVE FUCKING MCGARRETT!!!!"

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robanybody December 17 2010, 01:27:02 UTC
Ahahahaha! I am so totally convinced that his doctor takes one look at the various scars and bruises and scrapes all over Danny's body when he comes in for his physical and decides that it's easier to focus on the blood pressure because at least he knows he can control that.

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charliehey December 16 2010, 16:38:46 UTC
I've decided, based entirely on the world you set up in your stories, that I ship Kono/Steve and Danny/Chin. Just FYI.

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robanybody December 17 2010, 02:08:05 UTC
And thanks to Cast, I ship them all together! OT4, baby. :D

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charliehey December 17 2010, 06:43:34 UTC
OT4s are the best configuration of people ever, seriously. :-*********

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ifeelbetter December 16 2010, 16:38:56 UTC
You are. Just. THE BEST. You make happy things happen in the universe. It's like what Peter Pan said about fairies and clapping...you write fanfiction and, somewhere, a unicorn is born. I'M JUST SAYING.

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robanybody December 17 2010, 02:08:49 UTC
Yay, unicorns are real now! I'm also incredibly happy that you liked this. ♥

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robanybody December 17 2010, 02:10:12 UTC
Ahahahaha! He's totally going to start writing mystery novels under a pseudonym because it turns out that he actually has decent writing skills after all the fiction he puts in his reports.

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imkalena January 1 2011, 22:59:10 UTC
I KNEW IT. He's the one who's writing those damn Castle novels!

Loved it. :)

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