[fic] Tag [ghost hunters]

[roadtriphome]

Title: "Tag"
Fandom: Ghost Hunters
Pairing: Steve&Tango
Genre: General
Rating: PG-13 for one f-word use
Summary: Tango gets the experience he was hoping for on a third visit to St. Augustine.
Disclaimer: I don't own or know TAPS or Ghost Hunters and this was not written to speak slander or make money. Just remember, it's all pretend.
Note: First

Comments

[nakannalee]

Eee, this was a fun read. I love how you took the time to give a strong idea of setting--especially the coldness. Since the investigation is always in the dark, as a writer it's like describing things wearing a blindfold, you know? All temperature and touch and gut instinct. You did that so well here.

And the reversal of Steve and Tango, which one was sleeping--that was a nice surprise, kept me on my toes. :) The girl was pretty creepy...especially that part about her features disappearing back into the shadow. Oooh. "Come play with me" = so Shining.

I also like how you included Steve and Tango's general inclination to touch one another and yet didn't make it outwardly slashy. It would be so easy to clutter up fics with the turmoil of inner thoughts, blah blah, but you let the story take care of itself without "editorializing" in any way. It's always nice when the author trusts the reader to see what they want, where they want. :)

Great job! *goes to look through your lj for more GH fics*

[roadtriphome]

Oh man, this made my day! It's been a while since I've had a good solid review. Thank you! I've never written GH fic before but after reading yours I just had to try it myself (so you don't have to keep looking *lol*, but I DO have more fic of other fandoms though).

Hmm, any GH fic challenges you wanna throw at me? Now, keep in mind, I'm a Steve/Tango girl.

PS: You can find my other fic in the fic tag or at my site.

PSS: I sure wish I could post it on the FanFiction com. >.< They haven't added me yet.

[kilala10]

Yay! this was fun to read. I'm not much for words, so this comment won't be long. Thanks for sharing

[roadtriphome]

No worries! Thank YOU for commenting. That means a lot.

[kilala10]

anytime!~~

[muse127]

This was great!

I loved the overall creepy feeling of your fic. The girl definitely hit upon that, but also the dream state that Tango was in.

I especially enjoyed the ending. I love how it was Steve that saved Tango despite his fear of heights.

Thank you for this. <3

[roadtriphome]

I actually want to do more with St. Augustine, since it was such a powerful experience for them, but I just had to get this out. I actually meant for this short-fic to be longer, but who knows, maybe the team will return or show up the next day. *shrug*

I think it's a powerful show of affection for Steve to push past his fears to save Tango. His teammate might not have fallen, but the very idea him any where near that landing makes Steve have to take matters into his own hands and pull him back.

I'm sure they'll be up there for a while though, after all that. That would be a big step for Steve, but he's probably pretty shaken.

[coocoo4oc_slash]

aw!
what a sweet little matchmaking ghost:)

that was really cute.
i (obviously) loved when steve (n. one who is also afraid of heights) saved tango from his (totally adorable) paranormal experience of doom.

XD