He's Put A Team Together

[rix_scaedu]

I wrote this to aldersprig's 12th prompt "A long-cold-to-each-other pair who once loved each other are brought together by a quest."  This is followed by Then They Started Making A Plan.

“Spatelli!”  The screeching, auburn haired sell-sword looked magnificent but now was not the time to tell her that.  “You told me you were going to get Tarrascotti for this

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[aldersprig]

Love it!

(Want more, too)

[rix_scaedu]

Good!

And a funny thing you should say that. You know that next prompt? :)

[aldersprig]

Ooh, Yay!

[anonymous]

What a fun beginning! I hope they get to annoy each other lots and lots. The names are neat, I enjoyed sounding them out to myself with exaggerated accents.

I think the last line has a typo though.

-Friendly Anon

[rix_scaedu]

I have author's blindness. I've had a look at the last line and I can't see it. What am I missing?

But it is a fun beginning, isn't it?

[kelkyag]

Last like: s/if/of/

[rix_scaedu]

Thank you, fixed.

[tuftears]

This one looks interesting. };)

[rix_scaedu]

Thank you!

[kelkyag]

In the explosive way, yes ...

*laugh*

[ysabetwordsmith]

I love the punchline.