Pills, Booze, and Exploitation

[riverlad]

Comments

[befanini]

I needed this... it's been a hell of a long week.
So who's the cherub then, eh? You, sweetie. ♥

I adore hurt/comfort that, for once, is free of exploitation (except the "good kind" that Sanzo longs for ^_-), and free of ulterior motives.

The story is dark, but not emo - you achieve that with Gojyo's maturity and his heartbreaking sincerity. I can understand Sanzo's pain and coping mechanism - even the most seemingly flawless beings succumb to weakness.

That Gojyo supplies the strength Sanzo needs to overcome his addiction - I can't thank you enough for that. 5 is the only "Bad Medicine" that 3 needs. ♥

[riverlad]

Grazie Bella, ciao. Kiss, kiss.

[triyune]

It's so sweet and at the same time so desperate

[riverlad]

How would Sanzo respond to a broken heart? Becoming addicted and morphing into a person who is "not there" would highlight his delicacy. If he is a person with a clear design (this is what others see), how would one deal with that brightness flawed? The addiction puts him in peril, but he comes to understand that Gojyo will stay with him no matter how difficult he is. Love. Now that's some salvation for your ass. Thanks for reading and commenting. It kinda' saved me, my heart was worn-down. Kisses.

[triyune]

So in order to deal with darkness he has to add more to it.
Love...well...if I hadn't been writing about it too I wouldn't believe it.
I'm glad I came across your stories.

[ditch_gospel]

What a desperate situation! I can really get a sense of the emotion that you've put into your writing. Maybe I'm an evil fan for saying so, but the idea of a Sanzo hopelessly addicted to drugs is very enticing.

I love the way you've shown the strong bonds between all four boys, and that you haven't undermined the significance of those bonds in order to bring Sanzo and Gojyo together.

It feels as if you still have many, many stories to tell about these two, so please keep on writing to your heart's content!

[riverlad]

Come on, now you're making my mouth water. I love the "evil fan" thingy. Thanks for noting the golden eyed boy and the green eyed man have a presence. I'm a 53'er through and through, but family is family. Without Goku and Hakkai, Sanzo and Gojyo would become undone. Thanks for reading. I hope this comes out right, but you seem excited. Yeah, yeah. I'm lovin' this. Excited writers supporting each other. What is the world coming to?

[micaela_a]

Wow, that was great! I love the way you tell the story and the way you mede them. Gojyo is so loving and caring and want to do things right.

Her hair wasn't a thick mass of blond layers framing a hauntingly beautiful face. Her eyes weren't the pure violet no flower could compare to.

Awww! So sweet!

Very nice story!! ^___^

[riverlad]

Thank you very much. I'm so very glad you liked that line. Thanks for reading!

[jedishampoo]

Hello 'dere! This was very thoughtfully written with lots of detail-- the reader is there. Where Gojyo has to deal with Sanzo when he's all wigged out-- sounds very real and unapologetic. I like how you noted that Sanzo's problem is affecting Goku and Hakkai as well as Gojyo; and that everyone was needed (even in mention) to bring him back

[riverlad]

Your comments are always so sincere, and you are such an excellent word craftsman, I never know how to respond. I just get goofy. I do know how to say thanks, though. Thank you for reading and commenting jedishampoo.