Fic: Teatime

[rinalin]

Title: Vignette #4: Teatime
Author: Rinny
Characters: Jayne, Inara, Mal
Word Count: 2,059
Rating: G
Summery: The fourth vignette in my Jaylee series. Inara learns there's more to Jayne than meets the eye. Special thanks to Aliaspiral and Thegranddewru who helped with this.

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Comments

[mgsmurf]

I liked the Jayne/Inara interaction in this. How he threw her as he wasn't coming at the issue of Kaylee quite as Inara things usual. Jayne and his odd logic all made perfect sense with his character. The last with Mal was a light way to end it all, take away some of the seriousness the rest of the story held. Nicely done.

[redrush]

What is it about men and denial on this ship? LOL!!! Great job.

[anonymous]

“Don’t gotta worry, I ain’t gonna do nothing’ when she’s smilin’ like that.”

Oh That just made my heart hurt. This is wonderful! I love that Jayne surprised Inara. And the ending is just perfect.

Great job.

[alpdrucken]

Gah! Men are so weird and complicated. Please, continue! I'm loving this!

[katinka31]

Mal gaped indignantly at the empty doorway. “There ain’t no feelin’s!”

Yeah, that's what they all say. :P

And "wiles"? a;sdlfja;sldkfj;asdlkfja;