Fic: Teatime

[rinalin]

Title: Vignette #4: Teatime
Author: Rinny
Characters: Jayne, Inara, Mal
Word Count: 2,059
Rating: G
Summery: The fourth vignette in my Jaylee series. Inara learns there's more to Jayne than meets the eye. Special thanks to Aliaspiral and Thegranddewru who helped with this.

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Comments

[aliaspiral]

you already know i love this..as i only read it on aim about half an hour ago, but im commenting anyway because i love you.

I really really adore the comparison with Jayne and Mal with "there ain't no feelings!" because really, yeah. *snicker*

[dragon_mouse]

Love! Poor Inara, dealing with all those men, not having any feelings what-so-ever. *snicker* Definately AWESOME story.

[edgechick816]

*squeal* The river of denial runs deep on Serenity. *shakes head* I knew Mal has the burst in that at exactly the wrong moment, and then have the nerve to denial his feelings for Inara, silly, silly man.

Poor Jayne, he loves Kaylee so bad and he won't even say anything like it'll go away if he doesn't. Silly, silly man.

[thegranddewru]

Okay, I told you quite a bit on the IM. I think I need to read it again :) but I didn't see anything off about Inara. Nothing stood out to be not um... Inara-y. And there are several parts where I can really see her serving Jayne tea, and hear her voice quite well. It's shiny. And Jayne your alway good with, and then Mal comes in and steals the whole show in Wash like fashion!

I loved it!

[wily_one24]

Ohhh, this is brilliant.

Mal 'there ain't no feelin's!'. Noooooo, of course not. You stubborn, stubborn man. Both of you.

I like, I like it a lot.