Arashi!fic - Message (Sho+Nino) for waxrose

Nov 10, 2008 00:32

The original prompt was "Sho/Nino cuddles" from waxrose. This was supposed to be a ficlet. And, er, ballooned out of control rather quickly. -_- Self-edited, so please let me know if there are bits that don't make sense.

For waxrose, who is awesome, and also for kegom, flange5, and nicocoer who are lovely and encouraging and make me glad to be part of fandom. ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

Message (It's not really a secret) ~ Sho/Nino, though really more like OT5 ~ Rated G )

my fic, arashi

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nicocoer November 10 2008, 09:53:03 UTC
This makes me unspeakably happy. :D!

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2dong2woon November 10 2008, 15:17:11 UTC
Argh my ayes are little bleary but my heart is filled with much warmth and happiness. That was utterly adorable.
Some of my favourite bits:
'Ohno considerately moved Sho's (considerably emptier) box of pastries out of the way as he started thumping his head against the table.'

I love subtle bits like this <3 So like Ohno with his little gestures that shows that he's actually paying attention.
'it probably wouldn't be as bad as the time with Aiba, the vacuum cleaner and the pancakes.'
Put Aiba and a couple of random objects and the mind runs wild.
'He could feel Nino's piercing eyes on him the entire time, waiting for a reaction, though every time he glanced up from the papers Nino had his head bent over the guitar, hair falling over his eyes.'
omg Nino. I just like this part. I could almost imagine this.

Affectionate!Nino has my heart. I loved how this balloned from Sho/Nino to OT5<3. I loved the call back to Sketch and if i'm not mistaken, Sho had something to do with the idea for Ohmiya SK too? I love how this aspect of their ( ... )

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waxrose November 10 2008, 18:25:21 UTC
AJKDLDDLD;SKDJDLKDLF;F;. :))))) ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

This is everything I could have possibly wanted and more. Cuddly, tinny BFF-ness and it's so sweet that it just makes me feel warm all over.

I love how you write Nino, sly and sharp around the edges, but unsure and sweet on the inside. I especially loved during which Aiba playfully accused Nino of hogging Sho for nefarious purposes, to which Nino responded by sitting on him and tickling the hell out of him before Aiba could twist him off - because of course that's how Nino would reassure him, ajfkflsl;;jdk it's all so cute I might explode. Everyone is just spot on, from Ohno's calm to Jun's gruff, bottomless love for Arashi.

Sjfkf;lf;df I don't deserve you. ♥

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maiaide November 11 2008, 09:32:32 UTC
OMG warm fuzzies galore!

That was awesome.

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nicefinalbeam November 11 2008, 15:00:42 UTC
Everything about this is just fantastic, really. I like that Nino is secretly sentimental about his bandmates. I could definitely see him writing a song, with Sho rap! Yay! :D :D

Thanks for sharing. This was lovely.

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