TITLE: PINNACLE 24/26
AUTHOR: rhyfeddu
RATING: PG
SUMMARY: Definitely AU from "Eternity" on.
Cara's POV Kahlan/Cara, Dahlia.
DISCLAIMER: As always, everything here belongs to other (much more wealthy) people. I'm just having fun.
COMMENT: Twenty fourth part, a continuation from "Revelation"
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I had thought “making love” was just a foolish self delusion )
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Glad to see that Richard is accepting, stubbornly, that he has lost Kahlan to Cara...hopefully they will all eventually find a way back to where they can be friends again without having to rely on duty.
I liked Cara & Dahlia's silent communication ... it was a good way of showing how much history they've shared and that hopefully they too will find a way to forge a new friendship going forward. Hey it can only do Dahlia good to hang around Team Awesome ;-)
Never really liked Shota much but it seems she's been working for Darken against her will and that image you left for us at the end, of her, actually made me feel sorry for her..hmmm!!
Dohhhh cliffhanger o_0.....
Oh well I'll be "hanging" for the next update....Thx for continuing with this great story:)
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And an awesome comment... ;)
Sorry it took so long to get this out. Ah, life. You should only be "hanging" this time, tho' till about the end of the week.
Thanks! :)
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Cliffhanger...
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Cliffhanger should only last till end of the week this time. :)
Thanks!
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I'm not sure why but that made my heart hurt a bit.
I heart the moment between Cara and Dahlia. <3
Worried (in a completely OMG Can't-wait-to-see-what-happens-next kinda way) about will happen with Rahl.
Great update!
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I'm not sure why but that made my heart hurt a bit.
Maybe cause we've all been there? Yes? *sigh*
Thanks for reading! :)
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Thanks. Those 2 have certainly been thru the ringer - with me and the show!
Appreciate the comment! :)
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Dahlia was now the extra person, the one left behind while the couple went deep into the woods together.
I made a huge sadface. But then you fixed it later with the Cara/Dahlia ~moment, so I forgive you.
My own future was being decided in their quiet conversation, with someone else’s words
Oh Cara bb :\
Pleasantly surprised Richard handled things so well.
Also, Darken RAAAAHHLL omg. Cliffhanger!!!
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Glad you hung in there for it! Next wait, not so long...
To quote Jolson: "You ain't seen nothin' yet!" LOL
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