How Far You've Come

[rhia_poisson]

Author: Rhia Poisson
Title: How Far You've Come
Rating: PG
Characters/Pairings: Muguruma Kensei, Hisagi Shuuhei
Warnings: Swearing
Summary: It's been a hundred years since Kensei rescued some kid from a group of Hollows. Now, he sees him again, all grown up and fighting Arrancar. But has Hisagi Shuuhei, the kid from so long ago, grown up well?

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Comments

Very nice

[jimaine321]

Ahh I really liked it a bunch. It was cute and sweet and just love. I really liked your Kensei. He was very well done and very well written. Shuuhei was adorable too. I also particularly liked the interaction Kensei had with the other Vizard and Mashiro was awesome.

Re: Very nice

[rhia_poisson]

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

[ohlalla]

i like it very much and umm waiting for further of this story? haha.

[rhia_poisson]

I'm glad you like it, but I very much doubt there'll be a sequel to this.

[horusguard76]

Ohhhhh - shiny! *glomps* Since Kensei & Shuuhei are my OTP, this story is a very welcome read. Stories featuring those two are rare anyways thus that makes me double happy. :)

Excellent characterization and a very realistic situation and how you have it played out in the end. (ok, I AM waiting for something like that but I have my doubts that will play out like that)

Parts reminded me of stuff I have written and it's great to see that I am not the only one who envisions Kensei's and Shuuhei's interacting as a struggle for 'correct' titles and names and addressees. hehe

Thank you for sharing this little gem. I love it. :)

[rhia_poisson]

I'm glad you like it so much. Personally, I ship them as well, but I've got issues with writing romance. And I'm just waiting for something like this to happen in the manga, too, but, like you, I've got my doubts.

Thanks for the nice comment!

[horusguard76]

:) You're welcome.

Really? But writing romance is not that hard and with that pairing it kinda writs itsself. ;)
Aye, a story is rarely like the fans envision it but I am sure we will see Kensei and Shuuhei meeting in some way, otherwise why show their first meeting in the Pendulum Back arc? Wouildn't make much sense, ne? ;)

[rhia_poisson]

I find writing romance exceptionally hard. I can set up feelings, but actual romantic situations...beyond me. No idea why, though. But yeah-this pairing does kinda write itself at least from Shuuhei's side, I think.

And I really want Kensei and Shuuhei to meet-maybe set up a comparison for Shuuhei between Kensei and Tousen? That'd be good. Because he's got to have issues about his captain running off and becoming a traitor just like Hinamori and Kira and Matsumoto (even though Gin wasn't her captain), but they haven't really been touched on.