Author: Rhia Poisson
Title: How Far You've Come
Rating: PG
Characters/Pairings: Muguruma Kensei, Hisagi Shuuhei
Warnings: Swearing
Summary: It's been a hundred years since Kensei rescued some kid from a group of Hollows. Now, he sees him again, all grown up and fighting Arrancar. But has Hisagi Shuuhei, the kid from so long ago, grown up well?
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Excellent characterization and a very realistic situation and how you have it played out in the end. (ok, I AM waiting for something like that but I have my doubts that will play out like that)
Parts reminded me of stuff I have written and it's great to see that I am not the only one who envisions Kensei's and Shuuhei's interacting as a struggle for 'correct' titles and names and addressees. hehe
Thank you for sharing this little gem. I love it. :)
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Thanks for the nice comment!
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Really? But writing romance is not that hard and with that pairing it kinda writs itsself. ;)
Aye, a story is rarely like the fans envision it but I am sure we will see Kensei and Shuuhei meeting in some way, otherwise why show their first meeting in the Pendulum Back arc? Wouildn't make much sense, ne? ;)
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And I really want Kensei and Shuuhei to meet-maybe set up a comparison for Shuuhei between Kensei and Tousen? That'd be good. Because he's got to have issues about his captain running off and becoming a traitor just like Hinamori and Kira and Matsumoto (even though Gin wasn't her captain), but they haven't really been touched on.
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Funny, I write mostly from Shuuhei's perspective too. He IS the more approachable one between them, ne?
Ohh, that would be a very nice idea. Well, I was always surprised that Shuuhei didn't break down like the other fukutaichos because when he and Tousen were introduced he even knelt in front of him and I got the impression that he respected him a lot. Sure Shuuhei is one very disciplined individual and quite laid back but even he should have had his 5 minute break down. Maybe it will be shown in a flash back? *is hopeful*
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