The Other Son: Chapter Seventeen

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Title: The Other Son
Author: revenant_scribe

Chapter Seventeen: SUBMISSION
Pairing: Sam/Dean
Rating: R
Warnings: AU, wincest, semi-spoilers for 1.18 'Something Wicked'. Violence!
A/N: There is no new Winchester being added into the mix here. This is definitely not one of those fics. Please leave a review! It keeps my muse happy and makes my day!!
Summary: Sam

Comments

[revenant_scribe]

Yup, you're first. Hope you enjoyed it!

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I was/am insanely nervous about this chapter and I may have had a mini-freakout when I posted it. So your review just sort of made me laugh nervously and maybe have to breathe into a paper bag for a bit (I'm a drama princess, okay? It cannot be helped. Believe me, people have tried). But I sorta figured it was something like RL so no worries, no permanent damage done ^_- I don't much mind when a chapter starts going towards a schmoopy moment, what causes my little spazzes is a pet peeve of mine, which is when you get writer who posts (usually infrequently) and when they do post nothing really is furthered in the chapter at all. It's like you read it and the characters haven't developed any, the plot hasn't really been furthered, it feels sort of like 'meh'. And I always worry when I have a vague idea of what I want to happen next and then nothing much happens that I had originally intended (because my characters don't want to do it) that I'm about to post one of those chapters and it makes me feel disappointed and worried about the

[psychotic_scam]

I knew there was a reason I loved that score :) But now I gotta listen to it. So beautiful. Went quite nice with the chapter.

A chapter to really anchor them down a moment before letting them get loose. Is there going to be trouble? Well, there usually always is but. You never know with ficcers these days :)

Is Sam gunna find out Dean's his brother anytime soon? Out of plain, good nature curiosity :)

[revenant_scribe]

Definitely an anchoring chapter for the boys, and sort of a re-group before they take-off head-first into another corner of chaos. In answer to your question, yes there is absolutely going to be trouble, of course there is. No question. Buckets o' trouble. And also some schmoop.

As far as the brother-deal. *long suffering sigh* I am approximating this fic (roughly, of course, because my characters and even my muse seem to enjoy pulling the rug out from under me) at around 26/27 chapters. No one will realize anything about their relation to Dean (or Dean's relation to anyone) until around 22-ish, and no one will be certain until 23-ish. Hope that helps. I still have another little fork in their road before I throw the whole incest thing at our boys. ^_^

Awesome chapter

[angels3]

I loved their coming back together it was slow and quiet and oh so sexy.

John better back the fuck up because I don't think it really matters what John thinks when it comes to Dean what he thinks is better for Dean is what's going to happen.

Can't wait for more.

Re: Awesome chapter

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John's not going to really get in the way for Sam or Dean -- not really. Sam and Dean have another little adventure to go on before the Winchesters get reunited -- and know it. Glad you enjoyed this.

[revenant_scribe]

Thank-you! Thank-you! And about the whole brothers thing, that's not coming until around chapter 22-23ish so you have some time.

[leenys]

Still very with you! *grins*

[revenant_scribe]

Thanks! ^____^