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Arashi fanfic: Makings of A Miracle

Jan 10, 2010 16:40

.Makings of A Miracle
Aiba/Jun, tiny splatters of Ohmiya
PG-13, ~5700 words
If Jun had known how much a fall from the sky would affect his life, he would never have driven Nino to that fortune-telling place.
Originally written for the je_holiday exchange posted here, in which it was the last fic to be turned in orz (I need to stop failing in making deadlines ( Read more... )

c: aiba masaki, p: ohno/nino, c: matsumoto jun, g: arashi, p: aiba/jun

Comments 15

kirasebi January 11 2010, 16:12:38 UTC

That was really cute~
Aiba and Jun are so cute together… It’s sweet how Jun doesn’t believe in miracles and falls in love with Aiba-chan.
And yeah I think they will keep in touch forever ^^

sharksoul24 January 11 2010, 22:00:40 UTC

I loved this!! One, because it's Junba and there is not much of them around. And second because of the random mention of my homecountry XD (I checked twice to see if I was reading right). Thanks for sharing!!!

muharami79 January 12 2010, 11:37:14 UTC

kya!!! this is soooooo cute n romantic...no set ups...just coincidences to make it happen..I believe in that too!!! much more romantic, that way...Aiba is just pure LOVE!!! thank gdness Jun realized that sooner..now..I wonder who'll be Sho's true love..haha..thank you for sharing..

afrit_marid January 14 2010, 01:41:06 UTC

love this!
i hope there's a sequel..lol =)
just love nino's wit and sarcastic ways..lol =)

g_esquared January 22 2010, 13:46:48 UTC

Hey! I just reread this and well, when I'm not in beta mode, it's really a good bit of fun, and I totally appreciate the Aiba/Jun. I especially love this - “You loser,” Nino says to him on the phone that night, “Aiba’s been in love with you since forever.” It's so sweet, ugh I've always been a sap for things like that ♥

And like this - “Hey, MatsuJun,” Aiba murmurs, voice barely heard above all the noise reverberating inside Jun’s ears. “Hey, Jun, I think I’m going to kiss you now, okay?” has got to be my favourite line. Yeah. I'm sorry this comment is all out of the blue and everything but um, just wanted to say good job on this, I love the ending (I think it's just me without my strange beta hold-ups rather than the ending actually changing drastically - so I also apologize if my POV was skewed the first round I beta-ed it for you) and yes, you're totally welcome, I'm glad I could be of some help ( ... )