Arashi fanfic: Makings of A Miracle

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.Makings of A Miracle
Aiba/Jun, tiny splatters of Ohmiya
PG-13, ~5700 words
If Jun had known how much a fall from the sky would affect his life, he would never have driven Nino to that fortune-telling place.
Originally written for the je_holiday exchange posted here, in which it was the last fic to be turned in orz (I need to stop failing in making deadlines

Comments

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Hey! I just reread this and well, when I'm not in beta mode, it's really a good bit of fun, and I totally appreciate the Aiba/Jun. I especially love this - “You loser,” Nino says to him on the phone that night, “Aiba’s been in love with you since forever.” It's so sweet, ugh I've always been a sap for things like that ♥

And like this - “Hey, MatsuJun,” Aiba murmurs, voice barely heard above all the noise reverberating inside Jun’s ears. “Hey, Jun, I think I’m going to kiss you now, okay?” has got to be my favourite line. Yeah. I'm sorry this comment is all out of the blue and everything but um, just wanted to say good job on this, I love the ending (I think it's just me without my strange beta hold-ups rather than the ending actually changing drastically - so I also apologize if my POV was skewed the first round I beta-ed it for you) and yes, you're totally welcome, I'm glad I could be of some help. (:

And I didn't realize you changed your username! It's pretty.

Um yes, I'm actually going to reply your e-mail now, surpassing all records of lateness aren't I. orz